Reviews for Pyrotechnics
MischievousMoony chapter 1 . 2/15
I went into this story thinking it wasn’t a Harry x Oc. Perhaps fixing the names in the tagged characters would help fix that or at least make it so it says Harry and the oc are a couple
Kittens Kat chapter 16 . 11/8/2021
Guest chapter 7 . 7/5/2021
your story is really good i enjoy it tho my only issue is how rushed the relationship is didnt they say “i love you” after like one month? kinda weird to me but either way i still like your story
just a bisexual chapter 5 . 10/17/2020
i think its a gay instinct to look away lmao whenever my friends would all change together (they used to be in plays i was in one of them) theyd all be talking and joking around meanwhile im staring at the wall begging them to hurry up
Guest chapter 4 . 7/29/2020
"They had never thought about how starved for attention he had been."
No. Harry wasn't starved for attention. He was starved for affection. Big difference. He got lots of attention, most of it bad. That was an issue throughout his years in the Wizarding World.
Matt chapter 2 . 7/28/2020
You must be American. They don't have "wife beaters" in the U.K. Besides the fact that the term is offensive, even in America, in the U.K. it's called a singlet. Or a vest. Depending on the age of the person.
Matt chapter 1 . 3/13/2020
The word is dominant, not dominate. And pedistle is not a word at all. The actual word you intended to use was pedestal. May I suggest a dictionary or a spell-checker?
babymullen chapter 2 . 1/20/2020
You asked about where the Lugovaloses come from, this is what I found.

Lugovalos: The Lugovalos Empire is a large nation in Infinite Space, that originates from part of the universe far from the Small and Large Magellanic Clouds.

I also found that Lugovalos can either be a boy or a girls name, but more so a boys name.

I actually thought you just made up that name until I asked Uncle Google.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2019
Ahhhh my heart is emotion, yes. I love this book already
Alec Goodman chapter 16 . 4/25/2018
amazing can't wait to start the next one!
LeoESerpens chapter 16 . 6/28/2016
Thanks for such a great story! I'm gonna go read the sequel now :)
Auribus Tenere Lupum chapter 3 . 4/9/2016
Ah...another story that has managed to make me a dolphin. Hehe. (Dolphin because when I fangirl I squeal like EEE EEE EEE!) LOVE! Feels...argh...! Thank you so much for this story!

Guest chapter 16 . 2/25/2016
Amazing. I'm looking forward to reading the next one... At 11:15 at night...
Guest chapter 12 . 2/25/2016
Some spelling could definitely be improved, but you can write in a way not many seem to be able to. You can capture people's interest, and keep them hooked. I will get back to reading and probably leave another review later if I don't die of exhaustion
Youko's Befuddled Fox chapter 15 . 11/15/2015
I love your original characters so much fun. Your story is wonderful I truly enjoyed reading it, and am excited to move to the sequel! :D
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