Reviews for Twisted Facts
drea78 chapter 14 . 7/29/2008
HEy!

This is a really fantastic story!

I love it!

Great work!
PJ in NH chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
what a sweet story. loved martin and brian's interaction. at the end of the story it says there's a sequel..can you provide me a URL for this story? thank you.
Cassandra30 chapter 14 . 3/23/2007
No! Not the end! Get those scumbags! Get Brian safe! Has anybody done a DNA test on the Hoskins? Asked Brian what he knows? Argghh!
Cassandra30 chapter 13 . 3/23/2007
How bad can betrayal be? Well you have to trust someone to be betrayed. That is as bad as it gets. Sam and Martin would be an old relationship not a new one. And they might let Martin have Brian.
Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 3/23/2007
Good chapter! Those folks don't deserve to be called parents! Well written.
Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 3/23/2007
Bring down the bad guys! Especially the bad Feds! yuckers!
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 3/23/2007
Nice additional twist! Waiting to see why Brian is so important and yet not. One additional plot twist for you to consider. Martin adopts Brian! :)
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 3/23/2007
Ok Last chapter somebody left direction for Lauren in. This chapter as well and after the direction the beta went to crap in a handbasket. Misspellings, typos, misused words etc. Let's take a closer look ok?
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 3/23/2007
Wow! What a twist! Nobody looked into this? Federal Bureau of of What? Nice plot twist! didn't see that one coming! Who does Brian belong too?
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 3/23/2007
Martin is a good man. We need more like him. Hmm And yes I find it extremely funny he didn't ask for a parent. Wanting to know how Martin was is nice and he could be disorientated but he should be wanting his Mama by now!
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 3/23/2007
I hope somebody tells both the parents and Florida FBI as well as that Desomebody that the kidnappers intended to kill the kid and Martin before the deal went down! Let the parents know their lack of truthfulness almost cost their son his life! He will go into foster care or with relatives anyway. His father is a criminal and his mother may have known about it.
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 3/23/2007
That is what the boss is for, to take the heat while the team does the work! lol Great build up in the last chapter. Adding extra angst and uncertainty

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Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 3/23/2007
Way to go Jack! That was way beyond the pale and stupid of those Florida idiots too. They have their eyes so close to the picture they can't see what they are looking at.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 3/23/2007
Wow Martin! What a good daddy you will make! Good chapter!
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
Excellent next chapter! you are keeping up the mystery and the edge of the seat excitement!
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