|Reviews for Merry Go Round|
| caramelapple01 chapter 17 . 12/20/2011
Heyy! I absolutely L-O-V-E this STORY! :) make sure to update soon! :) C:
| iamabeautifulmess chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I liked the plot very much! It was very unique and refreshing at some point :) I would like to know how you came up with this plot, ja!
| Katwizzle chapter 17 . 9/6/2011
oh... my... god... he kissed her! Persona KISEED hotaru!1 you are you not updating? you CANNOT leave it as this! please hurry with a new chapter!
| trappedicequeenxxx chapter 17 . 9/6/2011
please continue :)
and i thought this was hotaruxruka
why is there suddenly a romantic part for persona?
(by the way you made persona seem very hawt.;))
| Andrea chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
O.o. Wow. Pretty kool she managed to drink until the 15th round.
| Andrea chapter 3 . 8/20/2011
Me:Love It! Teeheehee...
Mikan:Huh? What's wrong with Hotaru in this FF?
Me:Ummm... I think it's best to not talk about that... Heehee ll
Hotaru: *Pointing Baka Gun at us*
| Andrea chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
Hmmm...I hate it. -I seriously love it but Hotaru has her Horse Show Glove-
Hotaru: I hate it too.
Me: *Sweat Drops* But I do like the part when Hotaru won! Teeheehee Ruka still has to carry her bag! :) Bye Oh and Yes,yes I lived. -As long as I can write you these reviews, I can still read and live!-
| Andrea chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
Ahahaha I love it! Although...if Hotaru-Chan heard me she would kill me with her baka gun...lll
Hotaru: You're Sooo Correct! *Points Baka Gun at me*
Me:Eeeep! As I run for my life, GREAT JOB! I LOVE IT!
Hotaru: See you later. Andrea will read more if she lives...
Me: SOMEBODY SAVE ME! BYE!
| xXx.romance.xXx chapter 17 . 6/1/2011
| www chapter 6 . 1/14/2011
youre fanfic is not a typical one. you have an edge in writing. keep it up.. hoping to read more and more of your stories. :]
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
it's good but could you stop with the fucking author's notes?
| LittleLil chapter 17 . 12/28/2010
Oh my I was really surprised at the update after all this time :) it has been ages ...
back to business as I said before this fic is a breath of fresh air in the GA fandom and especially concerning the rukahotaru fics. This chapter was brilliantly written and I loved the interaction between Persona and Hotaru. Keep up the good work.
Steph (from Italy :) )
| zerokurou chapter 17 . 12/28/2010
hey aren't the pairs hotaru-ruka and mikan-natsume? im a little confused!but anyway thanks for updating
| hw56 chapter 17 . 12/26/2010
I like hotaru in this chapter. I know it isn't easy, but please update soon. :D
I like hotaru x persona relationship in this chapter. It's new, fresh, and very potential. I think their relationship could grow into something really interesting. To be honest, I kinda choose this pairing rather than the original pairing, hotaru x ruka. Don't misunderstand me, I like rukaru a lot, but I'd also like to see new pairings involving hotaru, especially when it is as interesting as this one.
Anyway, it's your story, so, I'm just letting my thoughts through. LOL.
Keep on writing, I'm waiting for your next chapter. Good luck. :)
| Trician Creed chapter 17 . 12/25/2010
what a pleasant experience for Hotaru :D haha
well i'll be waiting for the last chapter! keep it up ;)