|Reviews for This Side Down|
| ijpowers92 chapter 13 . 4/17
A surprisingly fun fic.
I don't think I've seen a story straight up replace Ranma before, but I've seen plenty where Ranma replaces someone else or he's "fused" with another character (and I tend to avoid the last one).
Also thank you for bring up Jurian incest as a real plot point/issue.
| Another Duck chapter 13 . 11/30/2009
This was a fun fic. Too bad it's not going to get finished. Ah, well, what to expect from a Ranma fusion? It's an interesting concept to have both the Tenchi and the Ranma stories mixed, rather than just throwing one character at the others.
| Six-string Samurai chapter 13 . 10/31/2007
This was a pleasant little diversion from real life. I'd be great to see another chapter but I can see where you started to taper off. No worries, it was good while it lasted.
| Master Chaos chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
...um hi This is a really really really good story. and I was wondering...if you could continue this story. ::bows and claps hands:: Onegai Onegai Onegai! :stands up: Its a really interesting idea you have here. It'll be a shame to end it here.I'm sorry to hear that you are losing intrest in your own wonderful work. But If you don't want to continue I'll respect your decision. Its your work. You do with it what you want. ::sighs: anyway as I say for everyone else
You are the author. Its your work. Ignore the fools who diss your work. Only listen to said fools when they give you suggestions that you like and accept to better improve your work then it already is. This is Master Chaos. I'll see you in the shadows. :bows respectively: ARigauto GOzimasu Tail Kinker-san
| dogbertcarroll chapter 13 . 10/22/2003
Tenchi has a flat top not a buzz cut.
I like the changes Genma has made in Tenchi.
He's got a spine! *grin*
| dogbertcarroll chapter 12 . 10/22/2003
"And she's a two-fisted drinker. You'd probably like her."
I've never heard of a Ryoko Soun pairing. Hm. You know
it wouldn't be that hard to pull off.
LOL. Ayeka working for McDonalds.
A little character development slipped in there. *grin*
| dogbertcarroll chapter 11 . 10/22/2003
Ayeka jealous of Sasami? *blink* That was surprising.
Nice scene with Nabiki. Very touching.
I like the work you have done on Ryoga and Nabiki.
It's nice to have more then one possible couple
to keep an eye on. Most people concentrate on the one
and the others are more of an after thought with
no alternate plans.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 10 . 10/22/2003
He was puzzled by the formality...but she *was* offering
food. *grin* Genma's training!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 9 . 10/22/2003
Yosho grew up on Jurai it's doubtful
he would have Terran morals. His father
and teachers would see to his learning
Jurian morals quite well.
His grandfather is half-human, and all
his other ancestors were fully human...
with the possible exception of Genma."
Good explanation for Yosho's actions.
Very in character.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 8 . 10/22/2003
Interesting twist. What was the message
Tenchi received? Washu?
You have to love Sasami. She rarely plays
pranks but when she does . . . *grin*
| dogbertcarroll chapter 7 . 10/22/2003
That is the first time I have heard a decent
explanation for why Ryoko was attacking him.
Did you buff up Akane? She shouldn't have
done that well against Ryoko. I would guess
it was just surprise. I was hoping for Ryoko
to give her a little payback. *grin*
Why would Funaho send out the message? Yosho
did talk to her frequently and had no doubt
mentioned why he had allowed her to be freed
by Tenchi. I would think that attracting Jurian
attention would be a bad idea at that point.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 6 . 10/22/2003
When is Ryoko showing up? Shouldn't she
have shown up already? He's been there for
a while after all.
*wince* Poor Ryoga. Well at least Ryoga and
Nabiki have a common goal. She turned out
to be a bit more evil then I thought she
LOL. I guess Ryoga isn't that different after
all. I can't believe Kasumi nailed him like
I assume the end bit is Ryoko? *grin*
| dogbertcarroll chapter 5 . 10/22/2003
The girls are even more hostile then I
thought they would be. I figured it would
take at least a couple of months before
they got that involved with him. *grin*
I like the changes you've made with Ryoga.
He always did make a good friend.
I was surprised by the comment abought hand
size. At first I thought Kasumi was making
a rather risqué comment. *grin* I know
it's foreshadowing for something but what
I don't know.
| dogbertcarroll chapter 4 . 10/22/2003
Hehehe. Ranma could escape the fiancées fighting
over him at times by hiding out at the Tendo's.
Tenchi doesn't have that option. *grin*
| dogbertcarroll chapter 3 . 10/22/2003
*chuckle* Sasuke is well trained.
I see you are keeping the mandatory
beatings in the story. *grin* The
pantie comment seems OOC, both in
the anime and here! *grin*