|Reviews for In At The Death|
| Baloogablue chapter 7 . 4/4
DAMN THAT AFTER NOTE KILLED ME!
| MercurialDestiny chapter 7 . 4/4
His headache is at Defcon Three," John snorted.
"He needs painkillers for the ribs and foot," Virgil raised a sceptical eyebrow.
"His throat is sore and his lungs are scratchy," Gordon added.
"And…if I'm not very much mistaken, I think his fever is spiking," Jeff added, grinning at Alan as he glared.
"You're all ganging up on me," he muttered irritably. They knew just by looking. How did they do that?
PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC PSYCHIC
| PipeDream chapter 7 . 4/4
SCOTT AND DEAN
AND JEFF AND JOHN W
AND SAM AND ALAN
AND...HOLY SHIT DUDE THAT'S INCREDIBLE
I just love the parallels...especially the card/GPS thing, that was golden
Plus the whole hings with Alan believing you can only be yourself sort of answering Sams issue earlier about how he tried to just be himself rather than the person his dad wanted him to be but that was more complicated than it seemed
Especially with the overworking himself going on in the background. It's all pure genius and I love every word
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/4
Sleep…sleep would be nice. No more weird dreams and feelings…
It started with a bad feeling.
OOOOH THAT'S META AS FUCK
| Guest chapter 6 . 4/4
THEY'RE EFFING PSYCHIC AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THAT NO ATTENTION WAS DRAWN TO IT SO THE CHARACTERS DON'T KNOW BUT WE DO AND IT'S AMAZING
| PipeDream chapter 6 . 4/4
Ah the way the characters all met up made my heart melt even as I laughed my ass of in places despite being so tense
All in all I'm feeling very mixed feelings
The only thing I know for sure is that I love your characterisations, your OCs, and pretty much everything else about this fic
Seriously, this should spectacular
| MercurialDestiny chapter 6 . 4/4
JESUS CHRIST WHAT WAS THAT
WHAT JUST HAPPENED
| MercurialDestiny chapter 6 . 4/4
Scott had once called it the Tracy Sense. It meant that he could always find you if you were lost, John could always tell when something had happened, Virgil could tell there was a problem just by looking at it, Gordon could never be snuck up on. Dad got antsy, even before he was told there was trouble, he sort of knew…
It was just a …thing they always did. It was so familiar that it wasn't strange at all. Surely every other family felt the same. It wasn't a mystical thing, it was just a…a human thing.
YOU MADE THEM PSYCHIC HOLY SHIT YES!
| PipeDream chapter 5 . 4/3
Wow...so...OH that all makes sense
Scotts going to be so damn glad he brought his Bird, isn't he? It's going to all come together with the families and these idiotic boys at the academy and the Ghosts and the little brothers trapped in either end of a collapsing building
Holy shit this is a masterpiece you have brought together
| MercurialDestiny chapter 5 . 4/3
I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING
HOLYCRAP I AM SO WIRED BY EVERYTHING THAT JUST HAPPENED
| PipeDream chapter 4 . 4/3
Oh Shit...when the model secret was revealed I was so excited until I realised that there was much more to go, so something else was going to happen
Then those people fired at the brothers and I figured this was it
Then Sam was taken and I figured that was it
Then Dean too
Then John and, I'm guessing Alan
Then that ending...Jeff giving in because the boys turned up which they wouldn't have if not for so many things coming together and AGH THIS IS INSANE AND INCREDIBLE
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/3
Oh jesus...things took a turn...
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/3
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/3
Oh my god
OH MY GOD THAT WAS INCREDIBLE
GAH that thing with the salt was INSPIRED
| suprNEONligt chapter 7 . 10/12/2016
Is there a sequel?! I need more! or maybe some one shots about Scotts card and the gps locator!