Reviews for Just Breathe
pmsdevil01 chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
this was a really good story. i enjoyed reading it.
Mishka89 chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
I liked this, it was well writen. By any chance was Dean's allias a shout out to the Allman Brothers Band? I know they used a song by them on the Pilot episode called Rambling Man..I was just wondering if I made a right connection or I'm so sleep deprived I'l hallucinating..lol
Onari chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
Great job.

"He'd deny it, if Sam woke first..." LOL, I'd like to see how does he manages to deny it!

Thanks for sharing!

xx
Kaewi chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
This was really well done. I've also wondered what would have happened if Dean had been a little later, and this was perfect to satisfy that. Thanks for sharing it!

Are you sure you want to leave it as a one-shot? ;)
Halcyon Impulsion chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Aw... that's good. I like endings where everyone is alive and communicating :) The world is right for a moment!
bally2cute chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Great story. The softer side of Dean was nice to read.
Phx chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Aw very nice. I am such a sucker for Dean in the big brother role like this and a Sammy owie.

And I loved Skin!

Great job!
shywalk chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
LIke this, very much. Thank you
pizzapixie chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Well done. I think you held true to Dean quite well, and downplayed the mush while conveying the concern. Great job. Thanks and please write lots more!
Ciya chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Great story! I've been wondering what Dean would have done if he had been a minute or two late.
kokomocalifornia chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
that was great!
beyondtired chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
All my little aw cells are just doing a happy dance right now. Loved it.
wild wolf free17 chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Well done. Dean seems in character to me.
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