Reviews for Technically Speaking
beckybw2010 chapter 1 . 1/15
This is really good, it's really realistic and ures the curiosity of how Lincoln and McCord meet. Would love to see more if you ever get the spark, really had my imagination going :) Perhaps you could write another section from Jordan's perspective? Just a suggestion... very well written, well done :D
Enda7lex chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
awesome story

it'd be gr8 if you added more chapters or something

xXx
Helisse chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
This is really interesting story. Sadly, in the movie we never saw an explanation how Lincoln and McCord met and why the latter decided to befriend the former, it was against the rules after all. This little story is a nice interpretation.
aussie sci-fi girl chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
this story is very well written. please continue.
Kelly Tolkien chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
"The shadows on his wall, his only source of companionship for the past few weeks, ran from the light that threatened to engulf them."

I really love this line, the shadows running from the light D

And nice story...
Erica Homewood chapter 1 . 2/16/2007
Good story. A little bland though. Add some more chapters and you'll be golden. Oh yeah, and remember to include a sequence in the X-Box virtual fight arena.

-Erica Homewood
Cymbala chapter 1 . 11/25/2006
this was really well written! I like the plot, and I liked the detail you put into the story! Thanks for the great fic!
SauvignonFierce chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
U hit McCord dead on in my opinion! please continue!
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
I just wanted to say that I really liked it, and I hope you update soon, and that it wase more than just a one-shot! Please continue and keep up the good work!
Nathanael chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Very much lots of potential just keep in regards to the storyline and keep it serious enough so that it dosen't become a comedy. lots of potential though Keep up the good Work
Shadow Silver Fang chapter 1 . 10/12/2006
Tres bien!

What a wonderful ficlet!

I hope to see much more from you, maybe interaction between Jordan and Lincoln!
wind of change chapter 1 . 10/7/2006
update soon!
NoLongerInService chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
I like it! Show's his metting with...*snaps fingers* Oh what is his name? Ah well, you know, the dude (doo-de) with the

Roxxan
cirana chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
yea! finally an Island story
mimifoxlove chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
Cool story!

I was so glad that there are more Island stories on this website!

mimi
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