Pretty plz continue!

This is a wonderful first chapter please update this story because Time travel fics are great.

This was getting really good.. I wish it could have been finished.. please if you ever get the chance could you please update and add more chapters... Thank you!

Wow! What a fucking trash fic this is good thing you stop writing. Pathetic

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This is amazing! Can't wait for an update!

Luke and Leia have zero impact. This is so dumb. There is no way Anakin would turn with the information that he has about Palpatine. Also how is Anakin visiting three different places before the twins can even get to one

Great Story! Please continue whenever you are able to! I want to see how the alliance is going to rescue Anakin Skywalker!

Just fucking dumb stop this story and learn how to write properly and fix your earlier chapter so many plot holes and stuff that make zero sense or have any realistic hope of happening

This is the dumbest shit ever give up on writing

every how does he have time to get to three different locations yet the twins can’t catch up that’s fucking the dumbest fucking thing I have ever fucking read like really you don’t know how time work and distance no let’s just have him jump all over the place as if there no distance make your fucking story make sense

OH MY GOODNESS! I’VE LOVED READING THIS SO MUCH! The characterization has been spot on and I’ve loved the twists you’ve put in while keeping some of canon and making it your own. Well done! You are an incredibly talented writer and if you ever come back to this I’ll be looking forward to it! Thanks for sharing your gift!

I can't keep reading this. Luke and Leia has simply too little impact to the story. I mean, they revealed almost everything to anakin and the counsil yet the plot is still the exact same as canon. Add to that that luke is supposed to be stronger than vader but nothing to his strenghts have been alluded so far.