Reviews for Key to the Cage
JustAwesomeIX chapter 14 . 2/19/2014
Marvelous. Absolutely marvelous. I confess, it's my first time reading a fanfiction of this pairing. I'm not usually a fan of this pairing because its always Neji as the seme, and I cannot possibly digest that, but the idea that Hiashi sold Neji as a prostitute to save Hinata was just too tempting. Good thing too, because I certainly didn't regret my choice. Plus the fact that you didn't specify who's seme and uke in this fanfiction (though my mind keeps insisting that its Neji), so I could digest it all and love it like how it deserves to be loved. :D thank you for writing this.
moonlitcat chapter 14 . 11/7/2012
Kinda disapointing. I loved the story not the ending
69ukeneji69 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
such a cool story

i really like it...
BlackBloodBitch22 chapter 14 . 7/2/2010
it was a good story and it had a great story line

but the ending was a little lacking and it needing something more

-BlackBloodBitch22
vincents1lover chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Onnee thing

Sequal?XD
TakedaEmo120 chapter 14 . 4/19/2010
happy ending! lovely! LOLZ I luv hw Neji is having his 'wet dreams' with a certain, cute, fox-like blonde! your writing skills are quite impressive, much more different than others, but still impressive... and plus, this is NejiNaru, my fav pairing... so... ya know what i mean... Gambateh ne
Sakuka chapter 14 . 12/31/2009
uhg,the ONLY thing i have to complain about is that thie is nothing indicating atime jump or a sceen switch, and it's starting tobe really irritating...

but other than that this story is really good...
xxasianicexx chapter 14 . 7/20/2009
L.O.V.E! this story is so cute! and naruneji is sugary and sweet :P good job!
AUehara chapter 14 . 10/8/2008
hah! I loved this Hizashi!

ah! I've got have to tell you something!

You made me cry! I felt so much pain inside me - I think as though it was Neji's! Yeah, I've this thing of felling characters fellings when reading fanfictions xP

and... a brothel? at SIX? god! you're worst than I thought I was! I put Neji into a Hell when he was a kid too, but he was at the age of seven - I think - ... wow! what a diference xDD

anyway, I loved this fiction! congretulations! I really liked it!
niver chapter 14 . 6/24/2008
Pretty good fic.

Some plot holes though, but I don't really care.
Maybe Im Unknown chapter 14 . 6/23/2008
*Snifle* NO! The end! (Insert Sub conchesnice smack both sides of face) Ahem, anyway its summer vacation so im going to be reading alot of stories so look forward for my reviews with your differant stories.(Insert smiley face sticking a touge ouy while pulling its eyelid down.
SnoweRestless chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
sounds interesting so far!

"I’ll haveta use some sort of genjustu to cover his age and height up ‘cause I don’t know any of that kind of pervert-"

Um, a young, helpless, cute lil Neji?

*raises hand*

I AM THAT KIND OF PERVERT

ahaha. good work, written very nicely.
G.L.G chapter 14 . 6/17/2008
Read your story (continually) over at least half a year, and wanted to let you know its on my C2, but if you want it off just tell me, k? :) Love it!
hA-UkA chapter 14 . 6/2/2008
Cute. Nice ending.
DoThis4TheThrill chapter 14 . 3/20/2008
omg luved this story big yoai fan and neji naru ready 4 next hap:D:D:D:D
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