Reviews for Afraid
asdfghjkl chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
Ehh, timing fail, this is during the Turn Back the Pendulum Arc. Hisagi was just a little baby then xD Komamura wasn't around and Tousen was Kensei's 6th seat. Sorry, just had to get that off my chest :P Great job, though. I loved it :)
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 7 . 2/19/2012
Great chapters! even if its not in Canon alot of this.

So who is next?







Yoruichi? (go with Kisuke getting bankai with that one)

Soi Fon?


Uryu Ishida?

Anyone else I havent wrote down? cause anyone would be fine, really
Furionknight chapter 7 . 10/3/2010
titania eli chapter 4 . 9/29/2008
chapter 4 is funny.

especially when Kisuke-kun said he saw a momster inside Minatzuki.
VioTanequil chapter 7 . 9/21/2008
THis fic was very nicely written, though a tad AU here and there. [But hey, I don't mind AU.] I love the way you characterized the different characters, giving a brief glimpse into their lives and the choices they made. Thanks so much for the great read. :)
Xstarlight-dragonX chapter 7 . 4/6/2008
Wow! This is so well written and in character that it's actually a little scary. I really hope you continue this soon.
IVIaedhros chapter 6 . 3/6/2008
Amazing example of making something make sense after it's already been set in stone. Why is Ichigo like Kaien? Well, now we know.
IVIaedhros chapter 5 . 3/6/2008
He's still a bastard. Who knows why Yourichi still follows him...more explanations :D
IVIaedhros chapter 4 . 3/6/2008
Hehe, nice...I deeply love Unohana...well, I love a lot of the more neglected characters...but this was great. However, I'm pretty sure Ukitake/Shunsui went before Kisuke and Urahara.
IVIaedhros chapter 3 . 3/6/2008
Always good...
IVIaedhros chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
Man, this is awesome. It's not so much that the words themselves are anything special or that you make any new plot, per's that you're able to post-rationalize a fairly shallow boy's anime in such a way that character's have realistic motivations and actions.
IVIaedhros chapter 2 . 3/5/2008
Wow...this was awesome...yea, I could see how he could have been messed up enough to send Rukia to her execution after this.
Viridian chapter 4 . 12/28/2007
Well, I did think it rather funny. I loved seeing all the senior captains together (in their youth) and standing up for one of their own. Unohana's sheer panic was certainly amusing, with what we know of the nature of her shikai. That was pretty cruel (in a funny way) of Yamamoto and the boys to withhold such crucial information from her. Oh, and the bystander Urahara getting gobbled up in the bargain was a hilarious thought too. Brought a chuckle when I saw Isshin's description in my mind's eye.

Please write some more of these insightful stories when you get a chance!
Viridian chapter 3 . 12/28/2007
What a marvelously complex character you've turned Matsumoto into! I like the depth of your exploration of her fears, the multifaceted nature in which her concerns about Gin and her captain and Hinamori's concerns coalesce into a story with a single unified fear. I especially loved how Hinamori's questions about Gin segued into her concerns about Aizen.

I don't think Matsumoto ever calls (or thinks about) her captain by his name without his title though.
ennui deMorte chapter 7 . 9/1/2007
This chapter is Brilliant! I love hearing the impressions Kenpachi has of all the Shinigami-especially about how their appearances correspond to their rank. The description of Komamura-taichou - lol! Too funny!

And Yachiru complaining about the guards not speaking Japanese and then standing on Hisagi-fukutaichou's shoulder demanding to see his shunpo again was even better.

All these short stories are great, but I think this one is my favourite because of how it gets everything across with wonderful humor and still nail all the characters reactions perfectly.
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