Reviews for Extra Day Off
Lisanna Ackerman chapter 1 . 8/23
Awwwww,kawaii sodesu no...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
amber chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
i have o say, this was tthe sweetest story i have ever read. the ending also wasn't lame. it was cute.
dragoness simplicity chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
AW. Kawaii! (cute!) This plotline's a little well used but your wording was fantastic. I love these types of stories _ \/

A lot of writers place talking on different lines (A new line for every new speaker). This helps a reader to distinguish which character is talking.

Just something I picked up on :P

Please write another NaruSasu story soon because I'd love to read it.

May your muse strike you pure and true.
bk99 chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
It's so cute! You should continue it!
getaiyou chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Jooka-Chan chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
That was so kawai

I just love it

More, please?
Kristen chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
I thought it was wonderful, and I don't mind at all if there is OOC. Sorry for sucky reveiws ''
XoXokibasmyantidrugXoXo chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
hey there Imari-chan_! great story, and no the ending didn't suck. heh you had lots of awsome detail and stuff in here.
Cat-san chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
EmeraldDreamer chapter 1 . 6/5/2006

Wonderfull story,
Tesina Gela Gardner chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
OMG! I luv it!
lo chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
That was fun. Nice job. Learn the difference between 'than' and 'then'. please. over all... nice.
justonegirl chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
aw... that was so sweet. nice plot. and everything like that.
MistoTug chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
That was cool!I agree,even if the people are ooc it's a fic,not the real thing