I haven't cried this hard since I read a suicide story in the PJO Archives.

Great read from start to finish - parts had me totally agast for the characters while at other times I was rofl. Thanks for putting in the time & effort to complete such a great story :)

Throughout this fix so far, I have found several parts to be funny but Damn, the scene in Demyx's class where Rikku and the others rap had me ROTFL!
I love how much quick thinking that took! Possibly my favorite scene yet.

...I'm glad it was meant to be confusing. I had no idea what was going on after the beginning. XD

YES. I HATE KAIRI. I ALWAYS NEED SOME EVIL KAIRI, AND THEN HER REPENTING. YES. SORIKU FOREVER. SOKAI CAN SUCK MY NON-EXISTANT DICK.

If I knew any better, I'd say that you were more invested in the Sephiroth/Cloud pairing. At least I was 3 I loved the story; there were a few typos and grammar mistakes here and there, but the story was superb! I especially loved Sephiroth's characterization. I read this all in one sitting; it was very good, and now I'm pumped to read the sequel, and I'll hope that doesn't fall under your 'never to be updated' list! (Kairi's obsessiveness was actually believable, and that really pulled the story along; I don't see how she can get even crazier, but I'll find out.) Thank you for the beautiful story!

I didn't like how Sephiroth talked about Sora. I was so mad at him. Don't get me wrong I like him being like that. But Sora is Favorite character from Kingdom Hearts. But that aside I like this as you said filler chapter.

Did Sora and Riku already had sex. But they were 12 right? That's what this part "after all, it was his fault the two had even slept together" is saying right. Or am I misunderstanding.

I understood the first part but the 2nd I couldn't follow it at all. But it got my intention so yay :D.

Awesome intro! It is like watching a movie, the images flashing through my mind

This chapter made me cry, It was so goddam emotional.

I looooved this story. I spent the entire day reading all of it. omg I don't know how I'll be able to play kingdom hearts without yelling bitch every time kairi comes on screen. Good job :3

very enjoyable; thank you for sharing!

This is a Anderson story thus far, but there's a problem that's tempting me to stop reading period.

You continuously use the wrong form of there, they're and Their.

It's driving me nuts.

There - used earlier in this review, also used to indicate a place - "he's neither here nor there".

They're - they are. Two or more people.

Their - ownership. It belongs to them.

There were also other word mix-ups (I don't really feel like going through and retracing, I read the errors once, that's enough), so I suggest you find a beta or double check your writing.

-Leslie

I loved this story! Evil!kairi is the only kind of kairi I can stand, so this fanfic was awesome! I'm glad sora and riku had a happy ending, and the next best thing to Leon/cloud is Leon/seifer so it was all good 8D