|Reviews for Piercing the Stillness|
| Adelled chapter 8 . 1/5
| Adelled chapter 7 . 1/5
Chapter is fine. A good read.
| Adelled chapter 4 . 1/5
Nope. Not boring.
| Jess chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
Not letting my login on my account... But I am loving this story because of all the stuff about PA and Penn State! I've lived in PA all my life so it's fun to read about it :)
| Vangelis chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
You have a very entertaining way to put things into words... very well written. Had tears of laughter in my eyes and enjoyed it immensely. Thanks
| HawkAngel XD chapter 24 . 9/2/2010
good work! very good!
| xoxokiss210 chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
| Renee chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
very good, I don't in general read these things either; better than many books I've purchased. You have a knack that you really should develop.
| PurpleOrchid85 chapter 23 . 8/2/2009
Nice to see a fellow Zack fan (I still can't believe what he had done though!) I always thought he was sweet yet naive, and I loved his floppy hair from S1.
In regards to this fic, I hope Whitman/Scary Man/The suspect gets his comeappeance soon & have more BB moments... it's interesting that there is no mention of outside lives yet such as any mention/appearances of Parker so I logically think Rebbecca has Parker for the time being during this "case" (I'd love to see Temperance watch and mull over a Booth/Parker bonding bit)
Keep up the FANTASTIC work!
| Helen chapter 23 . 5/27/2009
I just read the last 23 chapters so fast i couldn't get through it quickly enough. I found it really nicely balenced with a bit from every character.I really enjoyed the way you used Angela I could hear her saying those lines.
Please Please Please write more!.. beg
Although and i dont know if this is just me but long paragraphs are hard to keep track of shorter ones are best however this could just be me and my laptop. thanks
| mendenbar chapter 23 . 9/2/2008
Sorely missed, indeed. Spend all the time you want.
| a2zmom chapter 23 . 8/31/2008
Poor Zak. He's having one heck of a day.
I am really worried for that latest victim. Hopefully, he gets rescued before it's too late.
| HawkAngel XD chapter 23 . 8/31/2008
he really is gonna be missed... cool chap, update soon please
| doornumberthree chapter 22 . 8/6/2008
This is great! It feels like a real episode. The only issue that I have is that Whitman is a serial killer, right? Booth and BBrennan have all of the information on the other bodies, but Brennan never actually examined them (at least, I don't remember her seeing the other bodies). Wouldn't she have insisted on seeing them, to form a more complete picture of the killer? It just seems like they're focusing more on the one murder than the other ones. Like I said, though, this is great- and I hope you update soon!
| a2zmom chapter 22 . 7/20/2008
Some how I forgot to leave FB on this last chapter. I love the disturbing implications here. I hope you see your way clear to an update.