This is cartoonishly bad. Every character here needs to be dismembered and then burned.

So a creature of light has an adverse and visceral reaction to a person...a teenager at that...and Dumbledore doesn't stun him, bind him & force enough truth serum until it was leaking out of his fucking eyeballs? A red flag moment, IF there ever was one. And nothing in the immediate comes from it?

Dark, horror & vengeful Harry is bit different from the rapist, molester & willfully committing sexual violence Harry that is in this story.

I can only hope more people use your chapter 1 concept for more fics. He's suddenly a manslut having sex with the entire school and it's all about sex.

Chapter 1 whole concept was brilliant and then we start chapter 2 going fully downhill. welp

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Holy moly bro. That was absouloutley crazy. What a master piece right there, I applaud you man. Thanks for the great read :)

Honestly it was a very dark intriguing story. Yet not sure if I liked it or not.

Beautiful

Incredible

DAMN! I love Dark!Harry, SlightlyInsane!Harry fics and this is probably the best I've read. It kinda reminds me of "Inevitabilities" by EclipseWing. I would love to see Harry and Jamie conquer Harry's world. Though, the current ending is simply too eloquent and poetic to ruin.

DOES THAT SHEEP HAVE ROCKET PODS?!

You know this is a Harry and fem self right then why is this story opposite it was getting good until Harry had the feelings of hate for her. Like I was hoping for when he reunites with her on the other side they would be madly in love and he would join her.

This was such a splendid story. A masterpiece. So horribly messed up, confusing yet at the same time, it was so good. It has been an honour and a pleasure to read this. Thank you for writing this.

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