Incredible

DAMN! I love Dark!Harry, SlightlyInsane!Harry fics and this is probably the best I've read. It kinda reminds me of "Inevitabilities" by EclipseWing. I would love to see Harry and Jamie conquer Harry's world. Though, the current ending is simply too eloquent and poetic to ruin.

DOES THAT SHEEP HAVE ROCKET PODS?!

You know this is a Harry and fem self right then why is this story opposite it was getting good until Harry had the feelings of hate for her. Like I was hoping for when he reunites with her on the other side they would be madly in love and he would join her.

This was such a splendid story. A masterpiece. So horribly messed up, confusing yet at the same time, it was so good. It has been an honour and a pleasure to read this. Thank you for writing this.

wow

This is *such* a captivating story. I still have it in my archive as a story worth re-reading every so often, simply because the writing keeps me fascinated every time.

Thank you ever so much!

Don't know why but it's fucking great. Wish it had a bit more...

Last time I read this it wasn’t finished, forgot about it completely what a satisfying ending.

I had forgotten how fucked up and yet utterly captivating this fic was. A lot of the darker elements I didn't care for, but the sheer emotional intensity of the story is hard to deny. Though of course the rape and murder is horrible, the heart of the story is the inexorable, horrifying, painful, erotic, deeply satisfying, utterly compelling, and not a little bit insane dynamic between Harry and Jamie. Both go through character arcs that are intensely emotional, but Jamie's especially compels me. A large part of me feels like I've gone through the looking glass with this story, stepped into a world that's ever so slightly askew but always enough to make you question your sanity.

Were there weak parts of this fic? Of course. Harry and many other characters (e.g. Ginny) are very OOC, the grasp of English is at times (but only rarely) quite weak (especially the dialogue), and I'm not sure the fic really needed to be as dark as it undoubtedly is.

However, the fic is powerfully compelling and deeply emotional for all that in a way that can't be denied. It's an interesting concept that's done near-complete justice by Amerision and is worth the read (if you can stomach it).

finallt a harry i can agree with

Damn and I had hope for this story at first...but apparently not.

One chapter in and you can kinda already tell this is the shit incels cream to -_-

so rapey,,,,for what, man?!

Damn, this was definitely a good read. I was just a bit disappointed with the way you ended the story. One more chapter at the end showing a bit more of their lives would have been good.

Today I am doubting my sanity. I don't know why but I liked this story perhaps I dark or evil inside. Anyway Amerision, I really loved your story. Thank you very much for giving us this masterpiece

Holy fuck...
This, is what I want to see. Well done my guy.