Reviews for Take My Breath Away
amyblair chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
I liked your flashbacks of what Sam went through, his perceptions of what his life was and the people in it. I felt bad for him. It's all his fault... he was to blame. For EVERYTHING. That is Sam's way. He carries so much on his shoulders. It was nice reading the story and seeing the episode play out in this story. Nice job.
KatieLB chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
I dont usually go for rewrites either but i really liked this one... i like how you sprinkled sam's memories through out so we didnt get hit with them all at the end... great idea well written
gaelicspirit chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
Oh, this was really good! I liked how you wove in Sam's introspection. I loved Dean in this episode - how you could see right to his heart in his eyes. You did a great job capturing the anguish both brother's were feeling.

I was always caught by Dean's last line, "If it means anything, sometimes I wish you could, too." He says YOU, not WE. Not I wish we didn't know what we know, but I wish you could be spared. Poor Dean. Thanks so much for writing this.
Rachel00 chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Great fic! I loved the way u ended that. Just like the show u know somethings coming but your not sure when, where or what. this fic reflects all those things...great writing once again :D x
CCWhite chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Good job using Sam's thoughts during the Shtriga episode. All the things that really went deep into his psyche during his lifetime.
ashlyns chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Hey, wow I finally got around to reading this. I wanted to for a while and now I can. LOL. Thank good for long days and slow nights, gives me time to read.

"A normal person would see love and understanding, growth and companionship. Happiness from a sense of accomplishment: a graduation or wedding, the birth of a child, even a family vacation where you caught a fish the size of Detroit. Even something as simple as the smile of a loved one might steal of moment of your time as it quickly rushed by." I love that whole thing. I was so well written. My dad always catches fish the size of Detroit...or so he says. They always get away for some reason and we never see them. He fishes alone so...My dad's life flash will be a whole wack of big fish who got away. lol. I wonder if u see imagination when u die to?

"Sam could see the body language in his brother. He was getting through. Time to be gentle. "Now talk to me man. Tell me what’s going on."" Always be gentle with my Dean, cause I love Just drooling.

"Punch after punch, blow after blow. An even match until the skinwalker jumped Sam and he landed back first into the glass coffee table. He struggled to catch his breath only to receive two brutal blows to his face. Then it came; the fingers grasping around his throat. He looked into the eyes of the killer - his own brother. Dean’s earlier words flooding back to him. The pain in the voice of the thing that had taken over his brother’s inner thoughts and feelings, spilling them to Sam’s captive ears. Could it be? Are his issues that deep? The fleeting thoughts went in and out of his head and the air left his lungs, once again. I’ve hurt the only person left who would do anything for me. How could I have been so blind? The grip tightened around his esophagus and the stars came to greet him." I especially love the part with "I’ve hurt the only person left who would do anything for me. How could I have been so blind?" I just loved that part. No reason in particular.

Awesome! I loved it! Awesome job!
Sexi Silver chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Wow! That was deep, and very well down, with all the flashbacks. I really thought Sam was a dead man! Congrats on this amazing story! It's was done to perfection!

geminigrl11 chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
Poor Sammy . . . the visions he has in his almost-final moments, and his resignation at the end . . . so much pain and sadness. He has been through so much. Hopefully, though, he will realize that he still has choices and that the darkness doesn't have to claim him. He can fight - and Lord knows, Dean will fight too, with every weapon he has. Great writing, hon! You really captured this! More - and soon, m'kay?
Pixel-0 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Ah, okay, so now I know why I had two notices for this story in my inbox. That really confused me for awhile. Thanks, also, for the mention at the beginning. :)

I like how you took the best (well, in my opinion anyway...perhaps "crucial" is a better word) moments from each episode and tied them together all in this fic. When you introduced the first "episode moment" outside of "Something Wicked," I was wondering where you would go with it, but I like the direction the story took. So, Sam's an overwhelming vat of angst, but I like what you gave him in this story.

What I like best about the story is how the beginning and the end tie together so nicely. I think my AP English teacher beat it one too many times into my head, but I like stories that have some sort of running "theme," per se, through them. So, again, I liked the tie-in back to the beginning. Wonderful job again. :)
irismay42 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Ah, a Supernatural Geek's dream... All those important brotherly bits put together in one juicy, angst-filled package...

Really well done! And is Sam really just evil? Hopefully he'll be able to resist the Dark Side...!
Windyfontaine chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Ah, finally got to read this. Very well done. Poor Sammy loves to angst :) But yeesh, his life flashing before his eyes and all he sees is darkness-get the boy some Zoloft! I liked the episode, and thought there could have been more to it, and you have added that-thanks! Dean definitely needs to prank with him some more. Feel free to redo more eps, till we get the new ones :) Have a great day.
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Well, THAT was depressing. But that's okay, 'cuz it was well-written. Catch ya on the flip side.
H.T.Marie chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Ahh, poor Sam discovered the dark side, but he forgot that it's never gonna get him, not while Dean is around. LOL. Very well-written, girl.

MaddieM chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Caroline, this was so depressing. I love the way it was written (found two typos though! you know me with the typos) but it was so depressing. I actually loved this episode and I liked the whole POV thing you had going until the end. It was just too darned sad. boo hoo. Poor Sam...I don't want his life to be nothing but misery, death, and destruction. I hope whatever force it is that has been after him since he was wearing diapers is only after him b.c he ends up being such a power of GOOD that some evil thing wants to nip him in the bud! I want Sam to believe in himself! waah! *whine whine whine*
tracer2032 chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
definetly cool. You could tell by watching that epi Sam's mind was going a mile a minute, so it's interesting to see your perspective on the events, well i guess it's Sam..your interpretation of Sams...oh was good! great job and i so need to go to bed.
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