Reviews for Best Kept Secret
Twelve chapter 2 . 6/6
Ahahaha! That chapter ended in such a funny way. So many chapters! Cant wait to read the rest..thank you !
waddiwasiwitch chapter 143 . 6/5
This was a wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed their conversation.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 142 . 6/5
Turns out Riza and Elena have even more in common.

Another great chapter.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 141 . 6/5
Yes - this was great. Knox was awesome. He is a fun character to play. I completely agree that he would be able to understand them better than most. Great job!
waddiwasiwitch chapter 140 . 6/5
Poor Riza - she's really suffering from her traumatic past. Roy can only do so much.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 139 . 6/5
Hee - I needed the comic relief. Haha. This was adorable.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 138 . 6/5
Oh, poor Riza - this hurt my heart.

Roy loves you Riza, no matter what.

This was written exquisitely.
waddiwasiwitch chapter 137 . 6/5
ooh - I really need to catch up on this. How did I get so far behind?

Van Hohenheim? Ooh - what a twist.

I love how you write Roy and Riza.
WildSilence023 chapter 143 . 5/27
i just finished binge reading all the chapters that i missed since i last went on (instead of studying haha) and you just keep on impressing me! i really love your work and Roy and Riza in this recent chapter are just so sweet but real. It's so amazing how you portray them, like, they're not the fairytale all sugary sweetness and stuff because that's not how relationships always are and you really show it amazingly! (i hope i'm making sense because there's a reason why you're the writer, and i'm just one of your fans hahaha)

sending well wishes for you always xx
asarge93 chapter 143 . 5/9
I wanted to take a moment and say that I love your story. I read all the chapters in a week.
Shijaeger chapter 143 . 5/8
To be really honest with you, even after so many chapters, your writing will always be flawless and never boring. Your love for them is still strong. I can see how much love and time you put in these. Even if you'll update after 2 months, lol. And this chapter... I LOVE IT! SO MUCH WOW! MORE ROY AND RIZA CONVERSATION CHAPTERS! When she said that she can protect him and he said that is for her protection, too, JASHBGVCDCAFG I CRIED. I AM SCREAMING THAT NO, SHE'S NOT AN AFTERTHOUGHT AFSFGVAJFH AAAGGH WHY SHE THINKS THAT? ASDFGFDSFG
merendinoemiliano chapter 143 . 5/8
Very sweet,i loved Evert moment. See you soon .
The bookish keep chapter 1 . 5/7
You are amazing! Tanks!
Mal chapter 143 . 5/7
Thank you for continuing this story! Will always be one of my favorites.
si13ntm0n5t3r chapter 143 . 5/7
I've totally forgotten how much I love the small intimate scenes between Roy and Riza, so thank you for reminding me! I totally adore them. And regarding the "evil deeds" stuff, I think peoples' actions can be based on their own characteristics, their upbringing and current circumstances, so I totally agree with you. It's a very interesting topic I wanted to write about myself. Anyway, this chapter was great! Keep up the good work, but don't push yourself if you're desperately trying to scrape words. Take your time and have fun. This chapter was a nice way to start my day
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