|Reviews for Heaven|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/24
Awww man its a little unfortunate that this story is only in one shot. I was hoping for more because this story was soo good. I wonder what could've happen to hinata.
| DnMikado chapter 1 . 8/20
That's was great! I really wised it was longer!
| ShanaZeal chapter 1 . 8/4
Oooooh the feels, this was amazing! And I love this song too
| Grim Peasant chapter 1 . 7/14
I don't even know what to say. ehemm. it was finely written. I'll be adding this to one of my favorites. but why did she came to sasuke? why did she left him afterwards? here are some of my hypothesisshe left because she found out she was preggy.. -she left because she just used sasuke for comfort... ughhh. please answer... or make it a series. :O
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/6
Phenomenal! So amazingly written:) wow
| nicky trish chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
i love it
| No just no chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
You just ruined it for me , no offense but hinata was always the loyal , loving , kind person not the cheating wife granted i didnt like it at all tht i didnt even read it all . I got here by a link from some pic on deviantART but i did NOT like it , sorry im hating but im free to say my opinion tht is NT the hinata tht i like . not at all
| RyoPyoTurtle chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
It was bittersweet.
| EnigmaOfTheNight chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
I totally adored this piece. There was powerful emotions and the whole atmosphere was electrified. The chemistry between Sasuke and Hinata is undeniable. But what was disturbing was that she was married and pregnant with Gaara's child, yet she seeked salvation in the arms of the Avenger- that felt a bit whorish(excuse my profanity)! No doubt she loved Sasuke, but her morals were just not existing here
That's the only part I felt as a plothole. But the rest was pure awesomeness
| dsfghfjkhgfd chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
that was depressing so she went back to gaara in the end? but otherwise FANTASTIC writing i will definitely be reading more of your stories :)
| purvy sage chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
What a great story! Definitely sad... but everyone about Sasuke is melancholy after all. So it's a perfect fit (and I do believe it is in character). Great job!
| xXJinxYouOweMeASodaXx chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
...this was delightfully depressing. Very good story
| Jett4564 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
... I really don't know what to say, I was beautifully written very well done, I would considered it a master piece in its own unique way, keep up the good work.
| sensoray chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I always love your stories!
| Bloop chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
Ermegherd! I luuuurve how you use your words! Your vocabulary is MASSIVE! I swear its even bigger than the universe...