|Reviews for Unexpected|
| satomika chapter 1 . 9/28/2007
you're definitely right about Tokiya and Fuuko being the perfect couple...
i love their pair too!
i hope there's a next chapter to this...
| Nils chapter 1 . 4/19/2007
it is a totally different story from the actual series but it was good. _
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
| Roshan chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I like your story, But i that could be because i am a fan of Flame of Recca. It moves completely away from the Recca storyline. They all know each other right from high school so you should have made it so. Other than that there is nothing else i can criticise. However, I thought Fuuko had feelings for Domon Ishijima.
| yanagichyan chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
hi there! Mou.. how come all the authors are doing AU tofuu fics now.. still, it's good! haha, so yanagi is mi-chan's cousin, eh? mi-chan and fuu-chan are a lil OOC though, but i guess since it's an AU fic, it's understandable. hehe, do more!
p.s. the ending is a little hanging, so a sequel would be nice. if not, the way it ended is still okay enough. g'luck on your next! _
| Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
mush! loved it. i can't help but smile when i read it. nope, a sequel will only damage the feel-good atmosphere of the story. it's good enough as it is.
| gwen chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
just wanna share my comments with regards to the story i've read. the sequencing is good for a beginner, your imagination is so wide, youve added some spice that made the story real. characters and its personality are well presented. honestly i really dont have any idea regarding what flame of Recca is. but the moment i started reading the story it gave me a bit of understanding and appreciation about the anime stuffs. the story is so timely and it has a "kilig" factor for the reader. anyway, i'll be looking forward for more stories..goodluck and more power.
| anon chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
A sequel would be nice... :) take my heart away eh? :) in only one night...Fuuko and Tokiya...Tokiya the first one to smile instead of Fuuko...nice...overall it is a good story. Beareful of word construction though...I mean word use...there was a part where it should be 'seat' rather than 'sit'. Otherwise it was fine...
| Alscye Onei chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
that was sweet to say the least. you have great writing potential, with your word use and all... oh my flippin gosh... i sound like a teacher! well, it was a nice read anyway!
| Cagalli Yula Athha Fangirl chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Well I enjoyed it... even if it is ooc, I don't mind
To make a sequal would be cool too... but a bit more fiery if you know what I mean...
This was sweet and great too but I kinda like the loud Fuuko-chan XD arguing with the stubborn Mi-chan
Thank you, keep up the good work