|Reviews for Awakenings|
| To Die Laughing chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Ooh, yay! It's from Carlisle's point of view! He's my favorite! (I love secondary characters! They rock!)
| kaypgirl chapter 2 . 6/7/2006
Hmm, good story, I like it.
| eleanor44 chapter 2 . 6/7/2006
Wow, this chapter was amazing, i really like the way you write Carlisle, and the more i read of your story (and even of Twilight) the more respect i have for him, I clearly understand how the Cullens take him as a paternal figure.
You left a very good cliffhanger (sp?) here, even though we already know what happens, but i think it will be an emotional chapter, i want to know both Edward's and Esme's reactions to her change.
P.D: Thanks for your reply ;)
| Fallen into Twilight chapter 2 . 6/7/2006
That was UNBELIEVEABLE! Oh, my God! That was just...wow! I loved the suspense in here, it was so driven. This was just the right length, too. I guess you were right, it was MUCH longe than the prologue! Well, keep up the great work and update as soon as you can, please!
| Lhiannon chapter 2 . 6/7/2006
I love it so far! It's refreshing to see a new POV as well as a totally different story. Write write write!
~Lhiannon (yes, same one.)
| Katreda chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
yeah well it's short... but I guess you'll get more into details in the next chapter, sure hope so
| Freesia chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Pel, that was amazing. You've completely got how Carlisle thought. Well at least in my opinion. I'm so excited, that you're writing this. Can't wait for chapter 1!
| British Dreamer Girl chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Hey this is Violet Twilight from the Twilight Lexicon and I just read this and it's so good. Can't wait for Friday. That's when you said you'd update, right?
| Fallen into Twilight chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
No! I need more! This was great! A little short, but seeing as it was only the prologue, I would assume it will be longer. I'm glad to see another Carlisle/Esme fic around here. They are my favorite couple, perhaps even more so than Edward and Bella. They are just so perfect for eachother! Well, keep up the great work. I seriously cannot wait for more!
| eleanor44 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Oh well, this looks as a promising story, you left me wanting for more with this prologue, and i loved the Jane Austen quote, and may Elizabeth be related with Austen? (you've got an Austenite here ;)
Hope you update soon!
| DSampson94 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
You're off to a very promising start! Keep writing- I'm hooked.
| rosehale chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Wow. This sounds like a really good story so far. Keep Writing _
| Hellish Red Devil chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Yay, an Esme/Carlisle story! We don't have enough of those here. Don't get me wrong, I love Bella and Edward, but a little variation is nice (not to mention Carlisle and Esme are like the epitome of a lovely couple!). This looks extremely promising. (It's going on my Story Alert list!) Cheers!
| Joyce chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
Hey that was a good start to your story...but I'm a bit confused who the main character is. I hope it's a new one. Keep on writing!
| 0a0b0c0 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I love your beginning! You're a wonderful writer, and I enjoy the way you've written Carlisle's thoughts and personality. I will be following this story especially carefully to see your take on the beginning of Carlisle's and Esme's relationship - especially since I'm currently working on a fanfic covering this exact same thing (or something very close to it). Keep writing and update soon!