Reviews for Last Chance to Love
venus9814 chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
wait what. i hope you're still going to update, because you just got up to one of the most IMPORTANT PARTS! i need to know whether or not he sees matt, what matts reaction is, if their parents end up involved more in this story... UPDATE PLEAAAAASE
Dr. William Bell chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
Good Chapter. I didn't expect that, and I don't know where you're going with this. That's good. It's not cliche'. UPDATE SOON!
bored100 chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
when asap i like it i want to c what happens
Stealth Photographer chapter 3 . 12/22/2009
wow that was wow. Can't wait to see how that happened. Are the other 8 kids going to make an apernce too.
Stealth Photographer chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
That is so like him to blame him self for what happened to his brother
Stealth Photographer chapter 1 . 12/22/2009
That was a great begining. I used to love Takari and recently got back to them.
Dr. William Bell chapter 3 . 12/16/2009
Woah, now I'm really hooked. Those crests, you gotta love 'em. Very good chapter, although short. Can't wait until the next update!
Nerdy and proud of it chapter 3 . 12/15/2009
I really like this stroy.

I can't wait for the next chapter
Ris Fallon chapter 2 . 12/6/2009
I really like this. The first chapter really packed a punch; I'd be lying if I said I didn't cry. I'm kinda glad I'm not the only fangirl morbid enough to write about death and car accidents. It makes my mind feel less demonic. xD

Be careful with that first paragraph in this chapter; metaphors are great. Too many make the reader a little dizzy trying to keep up with them. Your descriptions are great though.

I like the last sentence here. But the added notes in parenthesis (four) (and Takeru) kind of killed the impact. Let the sentence speak for itself; it clues the reader in to the fact that he might have been there, particularly considering Takeru's dialogue is included.

Looking forward to chapter three; happy writing!
Dr. William Bell chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
Woah! Is that T.K. as a ghost, or is he really dead? This is a good story so far. Please update soon!
Jade Starr chapter 2 . 12/4/2009
I LOVE IT! I'm actually working on a hospital setting stroy as well, but it's a full blown Taito.

I love this please please please update!
Zyanya chapter 2 . 12/2/2009
Oh so there is T.K, Yamato and Hikari should know that, they are suffering a lot...this a good fanfic...Ill be waiting for the next chapters...see ya around
It's Me Fetz chapter 1 . 2/14/2008
Soo...I know that I already left a long-ass review to this fic but I just had to write more.

Dude...did you realize that I wrote my other review on June 6th, 2006? How crazy is that? Maybe that's why you havne't updated yet. I hope you get in "the mood" (sounds sexual XD) to write the next chapter soon. I want to read it. I love this story and I love digimon and I need Digimon fanfiction that you write so I can be reminded of the times we had like 3 years ago...wasabi, oi.
fred2008 chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
yo, this was a great story, so when you gonna update it? of course, if this is a one-shot then I guess we won't be seeing anymore.
Lozzie chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Please update! (grr...I've never liked T.K. and now the only thing that is spinning round my head is a load of T.K's...darn you Yumi-Ulrich4ever...)But the story is really nice even though you spelled dying wrong...
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