Reviews for Clashing Hearts
Yashi chapter 6 . 3/24/2009
Aw! when will sasuke n hinata actually talk? sry but im gettin too impatient! its jus tht im a big fan of sasuhina n i kinda hate Naruto... :P

PLS UPDATE THIS STORY n KEY TO MY HEART SOON! they're th best stories i've read so far! (n its th first time im reviewing a story..heehee :P)
UfailATlifenowDIE chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
i dont think sakura should be complaining about pink and green lol sasuke's so mean and he's talking so much omg
Bababa chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
Dude! Its been over a year since you updated this! Please update! I love this story and I kept waiting and waiting for you to continue it. :(
Ryan Arciero chapter 6 . 12/9/2007
I think you're doing an excellent job, and I personally enjoyed your cleverness by combining the anime with your story. Excellent writing and I'm looking forward to the 7th Chapter
sshhhhhhhhh chapter 6 . 9/24/2007
Loved it cant wait for the next chap but how u gonna get sasuke and hinata together?

aw naruto is so sweet bless him
chocolatelover1 chapter 6 . 6/23/2007
Cute story so far! I like it!

Hurry with the next update!
reeroy chapter 6 . 4/8/2007
Good job on the story. I love the plot, the humor but err I am going to be honest with you...Hinata is a bit annoying. He-he, no you've got her down great it's just that I feel like strangling Hinata because she's soo weak and hey-! That's a good thing, it means you've got her character in well...character :D

If you're offended then I apologize. I didn't mean it like your an awful authoress! Your stories, humor, plots are brilliant I say! It's just that weak Hinata gets on my nerves...TTTT You should see me when I'm watching Naruto...I always scream at Hinata to stop looking at that dobe and start looking at Sasuke! Oh yeah and I'll be like stop stuttering, confess your love to Sasuke damn it!

Erm...sorry for rambling.

Cool story dude, I definitely wanna see an update soon.

Reanne
Kajifire chapter 2 . 3/10/2007
Kind of odd, that I only realized it now, but two laps around the track is half a mile, I thought...
ashley chapter 1 . 2/2/2007
Ok I have one problem with this story you keep using the same words over and over and over again like milky. USE OTHER WORDS! Here is a list:

Black:

raven

midnight

jet black

ebony

White:

clear

pale

see-through

Skin color:

Smooth

tan

honey colored

ect.

USE WORDS LIKE THOSE! STOP REAPEATING THE SAME WORDS!

Like: "Her milky white eyes could see everything." or "Her hair brushed against his milky white skin." PLEASE USE OTHER WORDS!
RougeTheBat chapter 6 . 1/20/2007
OMG THAT WAS GOOD PLEASE UPDATE!
lite1232 chapter 6 . 12/19/2006
i nearly died of laughter when sasuke said. "to get the hell away from me." that was hilarious!
LoMXD chapter 6 . 12/11/2006
lol great job so far. I really am wnjoying it. update soon
a'tomic-pom chapter 5 . 12/9/2006
i really love your story
CheerfullyPessimistic chapter 5 . 11/13/2006
ive noticed that u have some grammar mistakes but so far the story is really good.
CheerfullyPessimistic chapter 6 . 11/12/2006
nice job...though it's kinda sad u haven't updated yet.
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