Reviews for Of Loss and Leaders
LaLa the sad doll chapter 1 . 9/20/2015
3 it just wow
Allicat9 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Beautiful-one of my favorites:)
Punk Rocker Fairy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Awww. Will you write one about when she returns?
readwritelive chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
I don't think words can describe how incredibly amazing your depiction of Carth's emotions are. I mean there is so little to say because it was simply that brilliant. My mind is spinning with the extraordinarily well written and deep emotional connection you portrayed in this piece.

You were Carth, you plummeted into that twisted agonizing love, that patient suffering. You became the character and through your exceptional word play, that was magnificently inspiring and rich with underlining poetry, you simply and completely blew my mind.

You have a talent beyond all talent. You are the kind of person that makes people want to write.

You are an inspiration.

Thank you,

Eleima chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
I woke up with a craving for a Carth fan fic, and I wanted to congratulate you on satisfying it so fully. "Of Loss and Leaders" was an incredibly poignant piece, with Carth very much in character as a "good, honest man". Beautiful, masterfully written piece.
TerraFire36 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Your stories always tug on heartstrings of mine. Whenever I am at a loss for inspiration, I read this or Bleak.

Thank you for writing such beautiful stories.
bulletformybanana chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Wow. This definetly the best KotOR story I've read yet. Fantastic job. I love the way its written, just so... perfect. I love it! :D
tracy chapter 1 . 8/31/2008

Ok, I'm just a huge fan of your writing, and I don't believe I'm a stalker although I've just been reading a storm from FFVII to FFX to this LOL. I just have to comment on almost every fics you wrote (I didn't play this particular game, but I'm a HUGE star wars fan who know all about this game and its characters)

It's just that you have this gift of words to actually influence your readers to feel as strongly as your character although we may not really agree with their decisions (I'm referring to your other fics's characters). Very beautifully written, and I even 'ache' for Carth Onasi. Thanks for writing and I HOPE to read your unpublished 'CidxYuffie' pairing soon!
Izzers chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
This damn near broke my heart - in a good way. Beautifully done.
Courtney Belle chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Oh the IMAGERY. I feel like I just consumed a sumptuous feast. Amazing and heartbreaking and beautifully done. (And "Carth-bag" sort of made my life.)
envisionartist chapter 1 . 8/30/2007
Very lovely, great work.
elle chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
so so so wonderful. I pretty much fell madly in love with Carth Onasi when i played the first kotor and in the second one, when he tells you to tell her he's still waiting- oh, how beautiful. This was such a great look into him and i have to thank you for the gift you've given of letting me spend a bit more time with him. :)
Angsty Fudge chapter 1 . 12/28/2006
Another amazing piece! - You captured Carth perfectly!
FuschiaFinn chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
I love this. Very well done.
LordEdd chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
hey, wow, excellent, you can really make the reader feel carths pain, you got a gift
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