Reviews for Sex on the Beach
crystal chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
OMG I love it i love it i love it i love it so much! it is so amazing! i can't believe that it is so awesome if only there was a 2 though...
deasia chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Magus1108 chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Wow. This was I don't like the Riku/Sora slash pairing myself, but this was a great oneshot nonetheless. It was hilarious! XD Keep up the great work! :D
hbhbhbihbkb chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
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PyroLyfe13 chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Oh my god!

You made coffee come out my nose! Do you know how painful that is? Very painful! -rubs nose-

But it was so worth it! (_) Dude, I laughed so fuckin' hard reading this! Haha...good job!
Saxima chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Okay so, it's currently 3:55AM, my mom's asleep, and I just finished reading this.

It was, simply put, amazingly hilarious. I love you. Thank you for writing this.
Dreamy Duskywing chapter 1 . 1/4/2011

Ohhh, you have no idea how much this made me laugh! super awesome! XD
KawaiiKilala77 chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Haha, this story is so awesome and so adorable. I love the way you potrayed Riku, Sora, and Kairi, they were wonderful.
Renkin-chan chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Epic fic! There are not nearly enough post-KH2 non-AU fics, especially well written Riku/Sora ones. Or if there are, I have never found them even with hours upon hours of searching. This fic totally made my day! XD
Queen of Dreaming chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I think you have just stolen the title of "Funniest SoRiku fic I have ever read." Seriously, everything about this, from Kairi's reactions to the absurd situations they ended up in to their parents to the moment Sora's dad showed up to the mental image of the three of them... it is a fantastically, hilariously genius idea.


...sorry. Please ignore; I just get a little excited when I find relief from the "DIE KAIRI!11!1" attitude.

In-character, positively portrayed, Kairi, in a SoRiku fic. This is fabulous and I admire you for it. Very, very well done - especially her plan to fight off the Heartless with coconuts. I loved that moment.

Finally, that one moment of seriousness, with Kairi considering how much the boys had changed on her and the possible strains of leaving - that really was necessary, and is what lifted this from "hilarious" to "hilarious, canon-compliant and really good." Wonderful work.

(P.S. I'm a SoKai fan... so you can feel more special.)
Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
At first, it was ok. Then, when Kairi got more involved, I really liked it! But when the gay stuff came in, I lost interest... Despite the fact that I'm not gay, ( at least I hope I'm not ) this was VERY well written and well described AND very detailed. So I still very much enjoyed it... thank you. Also, this makes me question my sexuality, THAT, my friend, is how GOOOOOOD you are ! Again, thank you. A
worst book ever made my eyes chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
that was the worlds greatest destruction of the kingdom hearts name that was ever made and i have seen every charecter of kh fucking eachother at once so thats realy saying something i mean how horrible can it get that was a absolute murder of all literiture YOU SUCK MAJOR DICK BITCH
Katana Black chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
I just reread this story and realized exactly how much I loved it...xD Lol'ing all the way through!
cat-in-a-bag chapter 1 . 8/21/2009
Haha! Really funny and really hot XD. I'm especially happy with Kairi in this fic - people tend to portray her badly sometimes, but she's really not a bad character.
byamon chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
I usually hate Kairi, but in this I actually like her XD

She acted just like I would when I see two hotties making out.. *squeal*

I love this story! It was really funny~
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