|Reviews for Atlamillia|
| sierragust chapter 11 . 5/14/2019
Speaking of which, what did happen to Seda?
| FireKitsune1 chapter 11 . 2/9/2018
I've really enjoyed the story you've woven together. It's a shame that I didn't find it until years after you've stopped. Though to be honest it wasn't until recently that I've started playing the original Dark Cloud and didn't find out about until 2011-12 so I wouldn't have been in the market for this story.
Anywho, great job on what you've done and even though it's highly unlikely, I hope to someday see this continued.
| sierragust chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
I just love the fight between Toan and Seda. That was one of my favorite fights/duels ever except for the scene where Seda kicks Toan.
| merlyn1382 chapter 11 . 3/7/2012
love the story i hope you do plan to write more of it when your ready to
| Lucky Ryuujin chapter 11 . 7/14/2011
A Dark Cloud novelization. Hallelujah! But I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while. Are you no longer working on it?
| WanderingSoulofTime chapter 11 . 11/17/2010
Awesome story. Please continue it.
| DR2334 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I love this story very much I've read all the chapters and its amazing. Your a really great writer. I know this story is on Hiatus for now but i hope you don't forget about it. Cause i love it.
| Inita chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
I have been playing this game for a while now, and after searching through over 100 pages of fanfics for this game, I decided on this. You know what, it was worth it.
The author can only be rewarded for certain achievments.
Very well written... I had a hard time finding any grammar errors. If I had any friends who were interested in Dark Cloud, I would highly recommend this fanfic.
Your development between Flag and the priest was thought out. Though Flag didn't really show any hostility towards him in the game, there was a slight hint.
Yes, yes. I agree too. I'm putting my faith in you to really develop Toan's character. (So far, it's going quite well)
Well that's about it so I suppose I'll get on with the other chapters. I don't plan on reviewing every chapter, so if I find any grammar issues, I'll put it all in the review for chapter 11.
| merlyn1382 chapter 11 . 5/5/2010
just curios will each village take about the same amount of time to fix
anywho love the story and the game look forward to the next chapter
| Dreylen chapter 11 . 4/29/2010
This has got to be the best Dark Cloud fic I've ever read! I like the detail you've put into it a lot. The game is great, but like many games, there just isn't enough mentioned directly to make the transition between game and story very interesting.
And I like how you've expanded on Xiao's personality. For such a lovable character, she doesn't get much screen time other than battle. I can't wait to see how you deal with the others, especially Osmond.
| Iris-Phoenix chapter 11 . 3/10/2010
Oh...oh wow. Never thought of it that way at all...and man I feel sorry for Toan now. Can you say trama?
| ChiioUnicorn chapter 11 . 1/22/2010
Two of your chappies are soo cool! I love the way Xiao and Toan have that playful, affectionate brother-sister bond! It's so KAWAI! (though personally, I'd prefer them to be in romance... XD)
(It's me, Sukiyaki-chan. One of your fans!)
I hope to see more soon!
| Trainalf chapter 11 . 1/20/2010
Wow, that was fast, update again soon please!
| yamiishot chapter 11 . 1/20/2010
Aw Toan, don't give up yet!
| Ryuus2 chapter 11 . 1/20/2010
I just cannot stop the feeling of amazement I get from reading this story. That you've taken such a simple and underplayed game as this and turned it into this incredible story is astounding. I hope you keep the flow of updates going like this.
Keep up the good writing!