|Reviews for The Third Day|
| krstnforth chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
I simply love the last line
| AroggantIgnorant045 chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
the last sentenceeeeeee :") /
| PotatoLizard chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I liked how it was all scattered and stuff...
Thanks for the fic!
| Crazycally chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Neji might be an icecube but atleast hes a loyal one
| I.Deal.In.Dreams chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
Skipping around time in one story is often confusing and definitely difficult...but you pulled it off flawlessly! I love how you showed Neji's emotions through his actions and his short, but well-chosen dialogue (my heart is still squeezing from gooey tender feelings!) And you balanced action and drama very well with romance. Fantastic job - as usual :)
| anthropomorphychan chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
It's an interesting sort of structure you have there ... but you made it work. :D Love the story. You really are an amazing writer. :)
| LonelyAsura chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
You are probably the best NejiTen writer on this sight! This story was fantastic, like all your other pieces of work. I hope you keep writing.
| bubbles12345 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
| Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I love the ending. Wonderful job!
| Similarly different chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
a little confusing but good all the same
| Okuyukashii chapter 1 . 9/3/2008
I like it. I understand everything and can piece it together in the right order, but I don't see why it needs to be that disjointed. Oh well, great job!
| trilliumgt chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
A few parts I didn't quite understand, but then again I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed. This one was great, I really enjoyed Neji's and TenTen's not so obvious relationship.
| quivering quill chapter 1 . 5/21/2008
good one shot!
| Defender of the Light chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
Aww...Totally adorable. I love it! I really like the way that the only "open" emotion Neji showed for Tenten was concern but he also let her rest on his shoulder. Very cute and not to OOC.
| SmallButPowerful chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
I really loved your story, it was sweet and exciting. At first I thought it might be confusing to read, but it really wasn't. Good job!