Reviews for Halo: Halos in Space
starwarsfanatic1632 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
HORRIBLE! THERE WAS NOT ONE SENTENCE WITHOUT A GRAMMER OR SPELLING ERROR! WHO WROTE THIS, A 3-YEAR-OLD? I'VE READ A BOAT-LOAD OF CRAPPY FANFICTION, BUT THIS TAKES THE CAKE! THAT'S THE PROBLEM WITH FANFICTION, NOBODY KNOWS HOW TO EFFING WRITE!
some guy chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
5 billion stars
huge jump chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
god, THIS HAS TO BE THE WORST PIECE OF FAN FICTION I HAVE EVER SEEN, IT IS A MOCKERY OF THE NAME "HALO" AND YOU SHOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOURSELF.
Blaziken Richtofen chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
!sdrawkcab kaeps em gnikam s'ti, emosewa os si tihs sihT !parc yloH

TRANSLATION (for those of you who can't read backwards): Holy crap! This s**t is so awesome it's making me speak backwards!
Fanficuser1001 chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
This is so bad it was funny. I saw it on Fanfic theater and I just had to see this for my self. My god this is so bad it's good.
WillieFuckhead chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
This is actually so bad that it's good, it's like The Wickerman or Twilight. It was so poorly thought out, written, and spelled, that it actually turned around and became a comedic masterpiece. Every time I read "And then he got tired and slept", I die of laughter. it's so unbelievably stupid that it becomes genius. It almost seems like a parody.
sputnik chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
Wonderful dialogue, creative conception of characters.

"What a load of old shit!" - The Times.

"I wouldn't piss on this guy if he was on fire" - The Guardian.

"CHOIRRR YEAH! Zombie Cancer!" - The independent.
Gregory Johnson Phillps chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
incredible
carez123 chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
WIN SAUCE

(you suck)
Wiredjunkie sucks chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Wj you are just jealous because you couldn't write something this awesome. Ps I saw what you wrote in your other weirdjankie account...and it sucked. You can't even touch the awesome majesty of squirreling. So go kill yourself.
Manager Of The Abyss chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
God-someone actually took this seriously? I have trouble believing that its even real!

This fanfic truly makes me hate humanity
a humen chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I... Don't know if I'm a bad 'human' for saying this, but...

THIS IS THE MOST EPIC THING I HAVE EVER READ.

Just 'liek' your Half-Life Fics, this kept me laughing hard for a long, long time.

Please do more of these, human. We humans need you to keep pleasing us with your wepon and such.
Rebelmaiden chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I liked this. Really. :))) I'll be honest and will say that I laughed real hard, but not *at* your writing. I just imagined real people doing things as they were written-and it does come out very much lol . My fanfics would probably look like this if I decided to write them in, say, French or German. :))(or they'd look worse, since I'd prolly use google translate xDD). As a side-note, it IS good for practice when you're learning a new language. :))(NOT the translator, of course xP)

So, no hard feelings. :))Anyways, since there's a lot of people out there in the fanfic world who just try to misspell as many words as possible and who make grammar errors on purpose for the LoLz of the community, I won't post any long 'writing advice review' here. If you're one of those 'lolz grabbers'(I'm new to this, but methinks they're actually called trolls *blushes in ignorance*), you're probably laughing your ass of even at what I've written so far. If you want constructive criticism, I think you'll say that somewhere :))) 'Til you do, cheers! :)) Don't let the negative reveiews ever make you sad and enjoy. Fanfiction is for everyone. :))
BAWBCABOOSE7 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
You are beautiful 8D
RHinKoMcGeezexXX-.Y.-Xx chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was pretty much the worst thing I've ever read, but it made me laugh really hard, so kudos.
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