Reviews for Halo: Halos in Space
Wiredjunkie sucks chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Wj you are just jealous because you couldn't write something this awesome. Ps I saw what you wrote in your other weirdjankie account...and it sucked. You can't even touch the awesome majesty of squirreling. So go kill yourself.
a humen chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I... Don't know if I'm a bad 'human' for saying this, but...


Just 'liek' your Half-Life Fics, this kept me laughing hard for a long, long time.

Please do more of these, human. We humans need you to keep pleasing us with your wepon and such.
Rebelmaiden chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I liked this. Really. :))) I'll be honest and will say that I laughed real hard, but not *at* your writing. I just imagined real people doing things as they were written-and it does come out very much lol . My fanfics would probably look like this if I decided to write them in, say, French or German. :))(or they'd look worse, since I'd prolly use google translate xDD). As a side-note, it IS good for practice when you're learning a new language. :))(NOT the translator, of course xP)

So, no hard feelings. :))Anyways, since there's a lot of people out there in the fanfic world who just try to misspell as many words as possible and who make grammar errors on purpose for the LoLz of the community, I won't post any long 'writing advice review' here. If you're one of those 'lolz grabbers'(I'm new to this, but methinks they're actually called trolls *blushes in ignorance*), you're probably laughing your ass of even at what I've written so far. If you want constructive criticism, I think you'll say that somewhere :))) 'Til you do, cheers! :)) Don't let the negative reveiews ever make you sad and enjoy. Fanfiction is for everyone. :))
BAWBCABOOSE7 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
You are beautiful 8D
RHinKoMcGeezexXX-.Y.-Xx chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was pretty much the worst thing I've ever read, but it made me laugh really hard, so kudos.
Derp chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Inuyasha's God sis chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Wow just... wow
Neonambassitor chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
It's nice to see people go into Dijjy foot steps and make these hilarious storys. All Halo fan boys who can't take a joke never read these.
Anon chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
This. Fan Fic. Fucking. Sucks.
Maddogg91 chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
Man this is awesome, your grammar and spelling are phenomenal.

Keep it up
That Mysterious Reviewer chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This story is a brilliant piece of work, which makes a new take on Halo. In this take on Halo, SPARTAN-II John-117 is a robot, named Joe Chief. This combines action on all fronts, as "teh normil aliens", and "teh flood", are fought off with unknown items, called, by the author, "wepons". Joe Chief has a tendency to be slightly a colossus, but this is good. This story is indeed, the best story on FF, and there is no other Halo story that compares to it. /sarcasm
Chris7221 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
This made no sense. At all. None.
shadow chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Master chief was a SPARTAN,NOT A ROBOT. How can there be a freaking FLOOD IN FREAKING SPACE! Not to mention that how can he exclaim that they killed his brother and then go to FREAKING there's also a weapon in town folks- a , and sorry squirrel idiot, they are only doing good reviews because they think that you are being sarcastic. And it doesn't work like- Chief isn't his last name, and seriously, JOE FREAKING CHIEF?
Martin Hexcoin chapter 1 . 6/25/2010
A shining literary masterpiece. This story will change your life.
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