Reviews for Promises
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
What a beautifully told and wonderfully paced timeline of events. It played out very nicely and I even liked the present tense although I normally don't care for it. But it worked here. You wrote it very well.

Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
That is a very sweet little story.

-Dyslexic Nerd
alfalfaba chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
That's beautiful. You write wonderfully.
lifechiaroscuro chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Great story. That totally seems like something Peter would do.
blerghy chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

I absolutely loved it! You provoked so many different feelings in me that I'm not sure which one to focus on. This is really an amazing piece of writing! :D
LunaNigra chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
Loved it... You almost got me to cry...

Dawgabs chapter 1 . 1/11/2009 an incredible story. I love all the emothions that you put into it, to make it just perfectly perfect. I almost cried at the end, it was so good!
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Oh Peter! You are just too good for words. He is so sweet and caring, and he expects so much of himself. I just love him :) Awesome story!
barelypassing4sane chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
that was really good...but I do have a question...

When you write something and put it on fan fiction can you see the account names of the people who read your story or just the number of people who have read your story?

(I hope that makes sense)
BollywoodRocks chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Wow...another great story! I really like the portrayal of Peter in your stories. The perfect big brother...why can't mine be like him?
CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
Wow, promises, I really liked this one. A big brother (or sister) is hard to be.
tcckgirl14 chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I really liked your story. It totally protrayed Peter's relationship with his different siblings. :D
Freawaru chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
wow. It makes me cry every time I read this.
Deitra Pawley chapter 1 . 11/15/2007
That is so adorable Peter is so cute as alittle boy loved it
Rubber-duckiesofdoom chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
I am absolutely in love with the world you've created (and I've fallen in love with Narnia all over again - I may have to put down the book I'm currently reading to do some re-reading!)... Peter is a dear, isn't he? I love all the personalities of the children; they're perfect.

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