Reviews for Danny Himura |
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![]() ![]() Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder who Danny’s real parents are. And what Skulker actually knows. Gosh they yell a lot. If I was Danny I might go to Clockwork for answers, but who know if he would help… Well I’m glad they accepted him, and it’s a good story so far. X3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Now it's Vary Poor Danny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Danny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's...Vary good so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was ok but i need to know whats going to happin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see that you're a fan of the comma. :D You may want to get a beta-reader, or proof read your work, and try to lay off the comma's just a bit. Other than the few grammer errors and other small details that no one really cares about, this story has the making for something big. I'm just a tad confused on the whole plot line, but when am I not confused? -Sparky |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story might be more interesting if it were not full of mistakes. Do you have a beta reader? someone who will read through your chapters before you post them to get rid of all the mistakes? it just might help if you did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH~~! XD at lease there's something good for me today :) getting sick on the last day of school sucks thanks for making my day better~ XD oh and the story is PERFECT~! can't wait to read the next chapter~! good luck~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds intresting. I will have to keep an eye out for this fic. Um, ideas... I haven't got a clue, I don't really know nor watch Samurai X, so I am of no help sorry, but I like what you have so far. By the way, are you a Christian? By your authors note I would guess so. I am a Christian. now I am just rambling on... love through the blood of the Lamb des |
![]() ![]() ![]() No offense, but, uh... this whole thing is my story idea that I wrote, except for the Samurai X crossover. But Danny having ghost powers before the accident, and Jack and Maddie not being his real parents... it's the exact plotline of my story, Alias. And I am unsure as to whether or not to ask you if you're stealing my idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rurouni Kenshin crossover Danny Phantom~ that's KOOL~! TWO of my FAVOURITE SHOW put TOGETHER~! XD can't wait to read the next chapter~ good luck~! |