|Reviews for Revenge of the green orange beast|
| Marshman101 chapter 5 . 3/9
This is way cool more pls
| sgriffin chapter 5 . 10/24/2014
so interesting please update
| tarrangar chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
um that wouldnt work on naruto if he can survive something for more than a few day and he does not lose a limb he will have no long term egative effets kyubi wont let him so even if he had too much weight it would do any long term harm
| tarrangar chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
they never told us we just know its alot
| tarrangar chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
if gaí taugh naruto it would be total overkill nruto has
regeneration so his muscles will be build up much faster than normalthe quickest way for naruto to become strong would actually have been to abuse his regeneration by trining while constantly having the first gate open since it would repeatedly destroy and rebuild his muscles making him get weeks of physical training in days
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/13/2013
| Kyuuketsuki Shinigami chapter 5 . 1/7/2013
Continue this story Dammit
| Kyuuketsuki Shinigami chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
That *shudder* life of youth as you put it scares me every time
| Kyuuketsuki Shinigami chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
When I read this pictured gai sensei in a speedo with lee face where the penis was
| Remzal Von Enili chapter 5 . 3/22/2012
nice story, there are very few that have naruto being trained by gai...kinda a shame because naruto is a exallent taijutsu type.
A random idea that I'd like to throw out, what if when Lee recovers he does what naruto did in reverse?
Lee: gai-sensei is training naruto now? then I'll get kakashi-san to train me! *insert youth rant and sunset self hugging*
| mishap chapter 5 . 8/20/2010
I realize this story will most likely never be continued or rewritten, but I just wanted to tell you it did have some promise and was very funny in spots. I am cleaning up my alert list and will be removing this from it.
| the awesome red lightning8D chapter 4 . 8/13/2009
...cinnamon toast crunch..
Neji's Byakugan can see through trees, but can he see why kids love cinnamon toast crunch?
Neji:Because it was destined to..?
KIds: No silly! ecause it has a sugary swirl in every bite!
| random flame of youth fan chapter 4 . 5/22/2009
TRIX CEREAL: sily rabbit, trix are for kids!
| Weaponized Mind chapter 5 . 2/1/2009
great fic. "ramen time" haha! I loved it! Just one thing You may want to use in the future, you know those old speed racers cartoon shows, where they go "haha haha" after every sentence? haha haha! well while I was readin i could just here gai and naruto having a conversation with the haha's. Mybe you look into that? anyway Much better then what I expected. I'll be waitng for an update!haha haha! :)
| Weaponized Mind chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
"read that pink book"
DO SOME RESEARCH ON THE PORN! The book is orange not pink, no real review yet, because I've only just read the first chapter, but The error with the porn was just to great to not point out, or wait to. I do hope this turns into a great fic. well I must continue reading now. :)