|Reviews for Wholesomely Pure or Deliciously Seductive?|
| Mashy-Gaara4life chapter 4 . 3/20/2013
When is the continuation?
| A Neverending Dream of Flight chapter 4 . 8/11/2009
this is really good please continue.i want to find out what happens between damian, gabriel, tala, and kai. please update. i know you haven't in over a year, but i can hope.
| ExplainThisKlarissa chapter 4 . 6/23/2008
that was good keep writing this
| Sealink chapter 4 . 2/6/2007
Oh no, what is poor little Kai going to do now?
You just HAVE to continue this fic.
Update, update, update!
| Susaku chapter 4 . 11/19/2006
holy crap, that was awsm, uke kai being molested is more than i can ask XD, oh well,i really like it , hope u can update soon :3 evil cliffie .
| Dark Kaiser chapter 4 . 9/3/2006
Ok, Tala's scaring me! Poor Kai
excellent chapter though!
| Feathered Fire chapter 4 . 9/3/2006
pretty wolfie tala
| Mizuki hikari chapter 4 . 9/2/2006
poor kai, continue
| kailover2008 chapter 4 . 9/2/2006
cool keep updating please
| SilverKaya chapter 4 . 9/2/2006
ya too lazy to sign up! anyway! update soon plz! luv it! poor kai
| Toxic Babe chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
This is so cool! You just have to update! And make Damien
REALLY possessive and protective! Keep writing!
| Xx Naruto and Sasuke xX chapter 3 . 8/9/2006
I actually think TalaKai would be perfect!If u do that, naturally, Damien would get angry rite? what about... Dranzer? Well It's ur choice really... I mean wat is easy 4 u must be done, That;s how u can write better.. the way u want it..
But since u r askng 4 suggestions, I must say... since Bitbeast can'tlive in human world, Make the FINAL pairing TalaKai and before that ending... u can put in both bitbeast in too... Am I confusing you? If I am tell me, K? I mean DamienKai GabrielKai ... did i get the sp? correct?
That's my suggestion, Damien wanting to get into Kai's pants and Gabriel saving him.. onside of the fic put in TalaKai... Make it an awesomefic of different mixtures..
Your story is so good so far... I enjoyed it and luved ur other fic as well 'Loathe
| This Account Is So Old Wow chapter 3 . 8/2/2006
Whee-! This is interesting, very interesting. ...TalaKai, for the win.
...Update soon? Please?
(Sorry for the completely incoherent "review".)
| Dark Kaiser chapter 3 . 7/5/2006
I think the Tala,Kai petting idea is a really good one!
This is excellent so far!
| Feathered Fire chapter 3 . 6/23/2006
gollibums wew demand it!