Reviews for Slavery's Mind
Starmaster10 chapter 7 . 11/27/2011
I'm not one for reviewing stories all the time, but this one is to good to go without. Seriously I'm surprised you don't have a lot more reviews, this story is AMAZING! It's not at all OOC, a little funny, and an original idea, brilliant! Good Job. :)
Marie Ravenclaw chapter 5 . 9/25/2011
oops, it looks like you did know...sorry...should have read the next chapter...and honestly, with the chem, you could just explain with alien chem and rules we haven't discovered yet...cause some of what you're trying to describe isn't really discused until you're in the higher chemistry courses (least here in the States)...
Marie Ravenclaw chapter 4 . 9/25/2011
*shifty eyes* great story...but sorry, some of the chemical facts were wrong and were bugging me as I'm currently in school to become a chemist...H2 O2 is hydrogen peroxide, bleach is NaClO...if you already know this and it's just cause Rose doesn't do well with chem, I'm even more sorry...I just can't tell if this is the case or not, and as I said before, it was really bugging me...

but I really do like the story...
timano chapter 7 . 1/31/2011
A very nice story-with a plot that works and characters I can believe in! 10 out of 10 stars.
Vera chapter 5 . 12/22/2010
H2O2 is hydrogen peroxide, not bleach. Big difference.
atimelady chapter 2 . 12/12/2010
Oooo, I'll bet theres something in the water...
I. A. Johansen chapter 7 . 9/16/2010
Wonderful ending, Sweetdeath! Great job!
Time Lady 802379 chapter 7 . 9/15/2010
Brilliant chapter! It's sad that this fic is over, but you sound quite overjoyed, so I'm happy too! Well done!
Muggle in the Know chapter 3 . 9/9/2010
I don't know what you're on about. I think this chapter was spectacular ... is spectacular ... Will be spectacular? I on't know which sense to use without giving the impression that something WAS, but no longer IS...

Anyway. I think it was really in character, and simplistically written, so as not to confuse the reader. It's sometimes hard to do that when you are going into specific scientific detail. So congratulations.

But mainly, as I said before, congratulations on keeping it in character. I could (can?) imagine this as an ACTUAL episode. And quite honestly, that's a rare thing to hear me say.
The Dark Marksman chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Awesome beginning Sweetdeath04. With the right company I wouldn't mind a little break on Cherush myself!
I. A. Johansen chapter 6 . 8/21/2010
Phew! That was close. Glad Rose is okay, and I hope that the Doctor can fix everyone else. Keep up the good work.
Donna Tempus chapter 6 . 8/20/2010
Close one!
Time Lady 802379 chapter 6 . 8/20/2010
I'm thinking, put whatever just cured Rose into the water supply, right?

Just a little note: Page breaks could be helpful to the reader, and also make the chapter look longer, something I discovered straight away.

Otherwise, great chapter, and update soon!
yellow duck chapter 5 . 8/14/2010
Oi! This is brilliant! Doctor as Rose's "slave" I love it! please keep going, it's an wonderful idea that should not be wasted. Rose as Doctor's master... I could see many fan girls jumping at the thought of that. Anyway keep up the good work!
I. A. Johansen chapter 5 . 8/8/2010
Intersting twist with the chemical being used before. ANd get him to Rose FAST
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