Reviews for Key of Eternal Darkness: Book One
doubledamn chapter 16 . 1/28/2013
Love the whole story, just finsihed Book One and it was fantastic, staying true to the games storyline while adding your own little twists to make it interesting. Keep up the good work.
PureOne1 chapter 16 . 8/27/2012
This story is really good! I cant wait for book 2!
Bloo-Ink chapter 16 . 5/1/2011
Man this is a good story but still. DAMN YOU FOR MAKING A CLIFHANGER! Anywho please start the new book soon! I'm looking 4ward to it! :)
Novanto chapter 15 . 12/17/2010
Anubis is a jackal, not a fox. But otherwise, a pretty good story!
Leo's Peridot chapter 16 . 8/6/2009
Thanks for writing the story! Sphinx and the Cursed Mummy is one of my favorie games! And thank you for adding Isis in the plot! Please let me know when the second book is coming out! I would love to read it!
Nova Gloriosa chapter 6 . 11/3/2008
I remember that electrified water! I always fell into it when climbing ledges and whatnot... Putting the female bird fro, Isis' past back into the story was an interesting twist though.
Nova Gloriosa chapter 5 . 11/2/2008
OK, my favorite lines in here had to be:

"A good captain always goes down with her ship!" She replies stupidly.

"The day you become intelligent is the day I become a genius."

Anyways, great chapter, I liked it. It's off to Abydos next! I always liked that place...
Nova Gloriosa chapter 4 . 11/2/2008
Blah. Retrieving those amulets was a pain in the butt. But I loved how you could jump onto the tables in the dining room and knock things over and one of the servants would freak out... I used to do it over and over because I got such a kick out of it! :]
Nova Gloriosa chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Heh heh, they accidentally kissed...

*Sings* Sphinx and Isis sittin in a tree-


Anyway, I jumped for joy when Horus went off that cliff in the game. Then cursed at the tv when I encountered him again after that...
Nova Gloriosa chapter 2 . 11/2/2008
Yeah, I'm doing schoolwork, but this is a nice reprieve from it ;)

Horus is such a little jerk. He was such a pain throughout the game. And I remember that monster/tongue/slingshotting thing! Reading this story is making me nostalgic... I think I may have to pick up my PS2 controller again and start playing this...
Nova Gloriosa chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
Nice beginning, I liked it. Haha, nervous Sphinx asking Isis what her favorite jewel is, that was funny. Onto Chapter 2!
Ayla The Librarian chapter 16 . 4/15/2008
OMG, I didn't know there WERE fanfictions of the game! It's one of my favorite games too! Is Isis an OC of yours or a game character? It's been a while since I've played it, so my memory's a bit fuzzy. I love the story though! Can't wait to read the sequel!
Eskimo-Otter chapter 16 . 11/30/2007
this...was...AWESOME! luved all the way! can't wait to see the next book _ update soon.
Midnight Alley chapter 16 . 11/30/2007
excellent chapter can't wait for book 2!
TigerFlower chapter 16 . 11/30/2007
I think this is the best chapter yet. There was nothing pointless about it this time, the emotions were handled well, and the excitement being placed for the next book was well done, can't wait to read it- if it's as good as this chapter, it'll be very good! Loved it.
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