|Reviews for As I Lay Dying|
| Renn chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Again, an amazing piece, but I particularly liked the style and structure of this chapter.
| organizedcure chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
| Feral Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
;_; Poor Axel. He needs a big hug. *gives him one*
I love your prose, I love your writing, and I love your little details. I also like how you slipped the flashbacks into his stream of consciousness, which kept it rather unobtrusive instead of just "having his life flash before his eyes", which is way too cliche.
I love your writing. I'm all sad now. I'm gonna go sit in a corner and cry...
| Raina chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
Yay! I can finally review! Or... I finally have time to review. x_X
I loved the Stream of Conscious you used. Awesome, just.. Awesome. The only thing I could have asked for were some more memories. But it doesn't matter, because the effect is still wonderful.
There was a line that confused me, but I think it's because there was a typo.
'Except it taunted me more, because it had seen everything I’d ever done with Roxas and the man who lived in her laughed endlessly at me for what, who, I didn’t have.'
I think you meant there, right? But anyway, awesome. Definitely going on my faves. -Raina
| Lecelamona Lecelanet Marzakey chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
that was so sade but yet so good at the same time. great story!
| Memoria Muse chapter 1 . 6/8/2006