|Reviews for Captured by Aangmegafan|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/2/2014
Why cant they just water bend with the water the guard gave them? Oe use aangs sweat... like katara did in that one episode? There are a couple options. Free the chains and break the ice... or use the water saw thingy to break them then aang can fight... or use avatar state.
| Hawksky chapter 4 . 8/13/2010
you had a few spelling errors, but it was fine
the story also seemed a bit rushed...
sorry, constructive criticism i noticed you had short reviews, so heres a long one:
the overall story seemed very well thought out and was very good
the firelord died a little to easily and more description would have made it more enjoyable, but i liked it nonetheless. the sentences seemed kind of flat, but it was ok
this is NOT meant to be a flam, simply constructive criticism kk?
| tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Good job on this story I really liked it.
| Pinkgurl14 chapter 4 . 4/5/2010
I know this story is old as heck, but...I really liked it. It was magnificent! _ Great job!
| Peaceful Dragon Rose chapter 4 . 12/22/2007
| Sakura Sango chapter 4 . 6/27/2006
oh wow fantastic story! I loved reading this fic! Wonderful job!
| frozenheat chapter 4 . 6/8/2006