sasuke is the one going on the training trip ...wtf and naruto didn't even think to have a bit of quiet rage or atleast not go to the gate it's what an actual person would do

is it me or did anyone else feel hella frustrated at the fight with sasuke naruto itachi and kisame I get he's weaker but that was utter bull shit don't make scenes like that cuz they often come out as just annoying and frustrating scenes to read

This is one of the nice stories I came across in a long time their may be over dramatic scenes but all in all a good story

well it started well but the fight and the emo thing pissed me to much, THE fights are dbz style ( new versions wich are pure trash i beat you ,you beat me and again , realy hate all new dbz to stupid nothing new) and the points you need to balance naruto hes like a sasuke emo version , wich goes easy on enemy but after somting sayd or done he goes full rage and starts to rant each fight, i do understand why you do that and i saw that in other stories but this coupled with dbz style fights is hell.
SADLY i realy liked were you were going but you got lost ,i will try to read a couple more chapters maybe this thing changes ,also you have to fix some names in previous chapters

wow that was highly unexpected saskue going instead of naruto really did not see that coming

This was a very good story, but you let too many open plots. A sequel is needed to tie up the loose ends. Other than that " kudos " on an original well written story line.

Pls pls pls update this story!

HOLY FUCKING SHIT A 11 YEAR OLD STORY

Ye olde all mighty powerfully mob. Original.

Learn to spell you moronic reject.

This is an older chapter but I figured I’d leave some feedback. probably going to stop reading from this point because the plot has an unbelievable vibe to it.

The Sharingan on its own is overpowered and you’ve given Naruto the upgraded version without any cost. It also seems unreasonable for the Hokage to give what would be highly secret clan information to a Genin no matter how much he likes this one in particular. The reason I’ll probablt stop reading is because the odds don’t seem to be against Naruto anymore. Not when he can essentially end any fight by making eye contact and it won’t cost him. Also, Naruto works hard and uses blunt force to achieve what he needs, waves of clones, stronger Rasengan, giving up finesse and versatility though sheer overwhelming power. For the most part it’s enough for him to win. Now on top of what he had he can learn Jutsu at a look, predict movements, cast and counter Genjutsu.

Where would be his struggle in a situation like this? In 3 Years he’d be able to beat Itachi on an equal playing field.

I also feel like the Kyuubi would be more aggressive when it comes to losing his chakra, even if being angry only hurts his position in the long term people don’t react sensibly all the time.

Bruh he just pulled a stupid move! WHY THE HECK WOULD HE SHOW HE SHOW IT TO OROCHIMARU THATS JUST ASKING TO GET KIDNAPPED AND TESTED ON! I THOUGHT HE HAD MORE COMMON SENSE THAN THIS

Kakashi i

Have you ever heard of SHADOW CLONE!? YOU STILL NEGLECTING HIS TRAINING BUT THATS FINE CAUSE NARUTO GOT KYUUBI NOW!

I haven't even made it to the middle of chapter one and I freaking hate Kakashi already!