Reviews for The Power to Heal and Destroy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter thank you for your wonderful work |
![]() ![]() Really good story but I would love to see a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean this is a ninja world grown adults and ninjas alike murder, slaughter, and massacre clans that had woman , man, children and pregnant women. So getting chased and beaten up wouldn’t be uncommon in that world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How do you suppose a mob would just beat up a child like that? No matter how despised, I'm sorry but adults don't just beat up children, if they thought he was actually a demon, they'd kill him instead. He's followed at all times by anbu. Hokage would not be impressed if they let some idiots beat up their Jinchuriki. There's a demon inside him! It's like kicking a nuclear bomb! This stupid "overabused Naruto" trope doesn't make any sense. He was NEVER abused this much. He was ignored most of the time. I will repeat, ignored, not beaten. |
![]() ![]() Well I haven’t read the original but you’d have to be pretty terrible back then to beat this garbage in the first chapter, I mean the mob abuse is way to overdue And just impossible with hiruzens laws and cmon kakashi abandoning narutos training in favor of sasuke that’s just impossible |
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![]() ![]() Eh starts off kinda bad you need to improve the logic and realistically of these fanfics before any established reader would read them |