Reviews for Shades of Gray
Tenia411 chapter 8 . 12/31/2014
I love this! You should be script writer for movie and tv because the image are vivid in my head. So much feel. :D
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
thesunwillshineclear chapter 14 . 10/30/2011
I'm gonna say it... This was fantastic! The flashbacks and memories that connected with 'Oxygen' were probably my favorite parts ;) great peice of work and an instant favorite.
Sparkiebunny chapter 14 . 4/24/2010
Wow, awesome fic! Loved it!
Autumnights chapter 14 . 11/4/2009
That was, by far, the best FF fanfic I've ever read. You are quite the literary genius.
Zoe-eoZ chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
ooh, cool. and it's so long, too! (:
tylee17 chapter 14 . 12/6/2008
hell yes! I enjoyed the ride. big time! thanks so much for putting this on here, it was fabulous (and I NEVER use that word...)

so glad I decided to give Fantastic Four stories a try (:

just in case I need to say it again: you did a great job here. very cleverly done how the real father-no substitute father-figure-came back into all this at the very ending, with Johnny's decision to simply help those in need of help, even if they are as corrupted as Doctor Doom. Perfect.

and, again, with the hilarious lines in this one. like:

“What word didn’t ya understand, kid? ‘Johnny’ or ‘wait’?”

just to quote one (:

well, thanks again. this was amazing.
tylee17 chapter 11 . 12/6/2008
"'...Mr. ‘Fantastic’, is it?' Personally, Penscik found the American’s appointed title quite narcissistic." LOL

no better way to stop those tears welling in my eyes than THAT...
tylee17 chapter 10 . 12/6/2008
aww, sheesh. now you got me. *blinks rapidly*

no, I'm not starting to cry...

this was such a great chapter.

the flashbacks were inserted so perfectly, and, they were beautiful, all of them.

gotta love these people's relationships (:

hell, I think this is my favorite chapter...

better read the last few now...
tylee17 chapter 9 . 12/6/2008
you know, somehow Leonard really is a funny character... (:

gotta admit I'm finding it kinda sad that Nora just died like that. oh well...
tylee17 chapter 6 . 12/6/2008
whoa, so fast paced, those sudden scene changes are making me slightly breathless... (:
tylee17 chapter 4 . 12/6/2008
you're making it impossible not to review, you know that? but then, I don't mind... besides, although I personally don't choose the stories I read by their review count, I do think, you deserve way more feedback than you got for this-so far-quite outstanding piece.

and just when I was thinking "really great and all, gotta love Ben's affection for the boy, and Doom's pretend-mentorship, but I'd really love to read some more about Sue"-you bring her right into this again. (:

did I mention I'm loving this story?
tylee17 chapter 3 . 12/6/2008
good job on Doc Nora's qualms about what she's doing with her work. man, I'm really beginning to get drawn into this fic.

aww, screw "beginning," I'm already knee-deep in it.

at least. (:
tylee17 chapter 2 . 12/6/2008
I like the way you manage to change scenes so smoothly that you don't even need to break a chapter into paragraphs. very well done.

gotta admit, when I "was in the woods" with Mufale, I felt just as spooked as him at "our" encounter with Von Doom (:

and I liked your original characters in this one, the whole characterization of Latveria, too, all that stuff. quite capturing. hope to see mor of those OCs-after my "laundry-break" now.

will be back in no time, pestering you-or maybe merely this site-with more reviews soon (:
tylee17 chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
oh, never'd I have thought I'd be happy not to have any exciting plans for this weekend... but now that I found your stories...

so, this first chapter was a nice start, the beginning, with all the news crews, and that Carson dude, felt perfectly movie-like, really. actually, the whole thing reads like a really cool movie-plot so far.

off reading chapter 2...
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