Reviews for An Old Couple
CaylieJelly chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Talk about creepy! But this is so good! :)
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Creepy.. And awesome.. Something close to Room 1408? That was fun.. Maybe the tarantula was the only real thing after all..XD
aenysa chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
This was... creepy. But I mean that in a good way. That was simply wow. Beautiful in its own twisted way.

Wonderful story.
Lcsaf chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
Cree. Pay. I got chills. Sano shot Megumi, eh?
smile-lifegoeson chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
ok. i have to say that was a bit creepy. i understand about the old couple but i dont understand the very last part about her crying and her face being wet. otherwise, great story!
O.o Kaoru-chan o.O chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
pyane-shiory chapter 1 . 4/15/2008
ok ill say it one more time you need to wright more its to short ok?
yuMeNami chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
this is beautiful..well made..
smilie chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great story! Love it- please update soon!
Mafaldyna chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
OMG! what a great story! it made me feel goosebumps from reading it
piwqefjk chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
Wow. That's a spooky story - sent shivers running down my spine.
sulou chapter 1 . 8/17/2006
I'm glad I didn't read this one at night, in the dark, alone. God, my heart is still beating fast.

True I am a sucker for ghost stories, but I wasn't expecting this. Damn, I've got goose bumps too!
bubblygoo chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
Brr... Spooky. And no author's note to make me feel better either.
skenshingumi chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
It is hard to find a supernatural story which is actually spooky but you did it. Great fun!
crasyducky chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
That was kind of creepy. But I liked it. I'm trying to think of critisizm and stuff, but I can't come up with any. I didn't even see any gramatical errors.

oh well!


keep up the great writing!
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