|Reviews for Tiegra|
| dinopoodle chapter 4 . 8/25/2009
This is good so far, it sounds like she is strong willed. I bet elrond is in for a run for his . I can't wait until she meets her grandparents. Keep up the good work.
| PureAngelEyes chapter 4 . 7/1/2009
I love this story D and I can't wait till u add more.
| tempest365 chapter 4 . 2/14/2007
This is a great story UD soons
| Mad Hattress Skylar chapter 4 . 10/9/2006
PAMS(Please add more soon)
| amrawo chapter 4 . 9/13/2006
great story so far! update soon!
| New Rose chapter 3 . 9/9/2006
I like so far but i dont want Arwen to be apart of the fellowship.
| kingdomskeys chapter 3 . 6/30/2006
Yay! Better! I'm so glad what a good sport you are-it's the only way a writer can get better, after all, and I understand how protective a writer can be about their work! Um, yes, I think the elvish for papa is "Ada", but perhaps you should look into finding elvish language sites online? There are tons of them. And watch the POV, you made it third person during part of Tiegra's, but really, you're improving quickly! And...yes, I like the idea of Arwen pulling an Eowyn and impersonating a soldier! Otherwise, she's so damsel in distress-y. .
(And did I mention Tiegra is a pretty name?)
| Selene Aduial chapter 3 . 6/29/2006
I assume that Tiegra is going with the fellowship from Imladris so I'd say let Arwen join also. Let the two girls get to know eachother. Just one pointer for your writing, please take a bid more notice of your interpunction, it helps the reader. Now we have to guess where some of them would ome in.
| Cenire Anno chapter 3 . 6/27/2006
I really like the plot, but you have a few grammer errors. As for Arwen...I really like the idea that she impersonates an elvish soldier...but for that she would need to go to Lorien because that is where the elves came from in the movie. ;D
| SilverSlippers chapter 2 . 6/14/2006
This is good...but... it needs some work.
First off, work on the run on setences, those can get very annoying. Two, make the chapters longer otherwise readers are going to loose interest in waiting. Nobody wants to read one paragraph and stop. Three, make sure to really put in the personality of your main character, otherwise it'll be boring.
| Cenire Anno chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
Cute, a little short, but interesting!
| kingdomskeys chapter 1 . 6/9/2006
Ok, so I really like the basic idea, but there are two main flaws I find with this fic so far (btw, Tiegra is a gorgeous name)-
-The run-on sentences. My GOD, slow down! You might want to seriously look into getting a beta-reader to look over your grammar and such (don't be offended-I have like 3). I only tell you this because they really detract from the awesome idea.
I mean, compare: Celebrian was running from the foul yrch that attacked her company her child clutched tightly to her as she vaulted gracefully as ever over a fallen log her golden-auburn hair escaping its clip as she began murmuring something in the ancient language knowing it might be her only chance to save her daughter who had all of her physical traits except for her eyes she had her fathers steely grey orbs that you just couldn’t lie to TO: Celebrian was running through the wood. She vaulted gracefully over a fallen log, her golden-auburn hair escaping its clip. She hugged her child tighter to herself. Celebrian began murmuring something in the ancient tongue, knowing...
-You're moving a bit too fast. What I mean is, it might've been better for Tiegra not to fall into Middle Earth until chapter two, so you could've developed her personality more. And explain just HOW Tiegra got sent back to Middle Earth.
THIS IS CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, NOT A FLAME!