Reviews for Mistakes of the Present
BlackShaftedArrow chapter 34 . 11/26/2014
That was amazing! I read this story all in the space of a few hours and I loved it! Poor Aragorn, he went through so much it's a miracle he didn't die. I guess it was his family's love that kept him alive, as corny as that sounds. But oh well, you're a fabulous writer and you have an amazing talent. Write on! :D
Jesper Arratay chapter 25 . 11/26/2014
If I thought I was balling my eyes out before I have no idea what you would call what I'm doing now.
Jesper Arratay chapter 14 . 11/26/2014
I know right? In RoTK when Aragorn cried that just made me love him even more. :)
Jesper Arratay chapter 10 . 11/26/2014
Okay. Rarely do I cry while reading but this time I was full out balling. Fabulous job.
Jesper Arratay chapter 9 . 11/26/2014
Poor Elrond. Yeah I totally see hes not the bad guy he was just upset. I wonder how pot Estel will react...
Jesper Arratay chapter 4 . 11/26/2014
Ohh this is so good! Dun dun dunnnnnn! CLIFFIE!
Metoochocolate chapter 34 . 7/24/2011
I think you put to much suspense in your story, I must have died 13 times from suspense overdose, I pity the readers who had to wait for chapters :D very interestng...and foreboding. So I know this is years late, but I hope your dads okay
green humbuggy mint chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
wickd! wcked!i wuz totaly confusd wen u started mentioning elladan and elrohir but i got it.
Maura the Sneaky Chipmunk chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Sweet! Aragorn, u should've been more careful! It's a bit like the Egyptians with all their pyramaid traps. 3
caro chapter 34 . 7/17/2010
This is really one amazing story, had me all teary several times. Really really liked it.
CeciliStargazer chapter 34 . 12/17/2007
Really liked the story. Good work.
Calenlass Greenleaf chapter 34 . 6/1/2007
You could add an epilogue. But despite this chapter's shortness, you were able to tie thing up pretty well. :)

With 34 chapter-it was quite a tale. And enjoyable.

May fair writing be with you.

DawnStrider chapter 33 . 5/2/2007
I did not know that this story was updated; so i missed this chapter;

I was thinking about this story and had to search for it. OH please, you have to update, do not leave it here. Please update soon.
Calenlass Greenleaf chapter 33 . 1/20/2007


sorry about hta. anyway, great chapt!
lostinterestsorry chapter 32 . 1/15/2007
Love your story. Sorry for not reviewing last chapter. I just plain forgot, but I really do like it. Ah well, I think my electricity is about to go off. Having an ice storm. So, I will print off chapter 33 and then shut down (the computer, that is).
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