|Reviews for The cheese and the worms|
| MDDC26 chapter 9 . 8/2/2013
Well, almost a year since your last update, I can't imagine you've been getting reviews regularly! In saying that, I couldn't just exit your story without saying it's an amazing read, very in depth and just well rounded characters.
| Wiggle34 chapter 9 . 11/20/2012
Loved this story is there more
| ninthwardgurl05 chapter 9 . 10/6/2012
Nice chapter! I can' t wait to see how you will end the story. Thank you for updating.
| Kimberleah chapter 9 . 10/5/2012
Wow so excited to see a ending to a great story upcoming. A J/S would be so sweet? I miss WAT still and always will!
| Michi uk chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
I can just picture Jack asleep, mouth open, catching flies, lolol! i hope Jack and Sam can get back together.
| ninthwardgurl05 chapter 8 . 8/4/2012
Phew! Finally got to read the updated chapter. Nice addition, I hope now Sam and Jack can start getting close again. Thank you for the visual of a "sleeping Jack" (It made me think of the "John Michaels" episode where Jack was asleep on the couch, before everything went to hell). Waiting patiently for an update.
| Michi uk chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
Caught up at last, it's great news Jack has finished with Anne, now all we need is for Jack to get his memory back Await next chapter ASAP!
| Michi uk chapter 4 . 6/22/2012
Loving this story,learning about Jack, as a youngster and his parents. I hope comes Jack out of his induced coma soon.
| DianeM37 chapter 7 . 6/12/2012
I am so happy that you are back. I've thought so often about this very interesting story and hoped that one day you would continue. You're to be forgiven for studying for your PhD thesis, as it was (just a little) more important.
I reread Ch. 6 to familiarize myself with the story, and I'm a little confused with the date in Ch. 7. Doesn't the new scene with Jack and Sam occur in December 2007, not 2006?
So glad Jack has split from Anne. Now he just has to remember what he had with Sam, and I am confident you'll make that happen. Thank you for the update, and I'm looking forward to Ch. 8.
| jjbird chapter 7 . 6/10/2012
So happy you're back with us! So happy to read more of this! Please don't wait another 4 years for an update or else I will come and hunt you down, my good friend. Enjoyed this very, very much. :D
| lori51 chapter 7 . 6/6/2012
Just found your writing and enjoy it very much. Read this one straight through and would love to read more when you can. All of them are spot-on and thanks for keeping these wonderful characters alive.
| Loves Jack chapter 7 . 6/6/2012
OMG! Welcome back! I'm so glad you are continuing to write this! Gave me an excuse to stay up way, way too late to read the whole thing from the beginning. It just reminded me why this is one of my favorite stories-because of all the insight we got of Jack growing up. His times moving, getting beat up, finally making friends, liking girls (did he get a first kiss from Sae-chan?), the army, the accident... We get why Jack is the man he is now and why we love him. Must have been weird for him to go home with yucky Anne and have to sleep next to her (yikes!). Can't wait to hear what Sam tells him, and his talk with Shin. Awesome writing! Please, don't keep us waiting!
| ninthwardgurl05 chapter 7 . 6/4/2012
YAY! Finally, another chapter added to this story. I cannot wait until more chapters are added. Btw, nice piece about "Martin's jealousy" and then making him rethink his beliefs. Jack Malone is the MPU, it would suffer without him. Please continue the story.
| Kimberleah chapter 7 . 6/3/2012
You are a fantastic FF writer. This is such an amazing story. You have everyone pegged so well.I'm so glad you are going to eventually put a finish to it. Great stories deserve great endings and I don't think you'll disappoint. Thanks for taking the time to write!
| Kimberleah chapter 6 . 6/12/2010
This a great story Malintzin. You've got everyone pegged right. Like when you had Viv feeling bad about how she treated Jack(priceless). But a great story deserves a great ending will you ever find the time? I sure hope so.