Reviews for Elemental
L'ange-Sans-Ailes chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
fantastic story, very angsty, kinda sad that it's only a one-shot.
Legend's Mist chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
This is a wonderful story! Loved "After all, water isn’t quite ice. And Bobby Drake isn’t quite elemental." I think you should have tried focusing on one thought - whether it would be the elementals, or "After Jubilee left, he became a leech" idea. You seem to jump to the elemental idea too fast, but overall, your movement of thought was really smooth. E.g. how you move from Rogue to Bobby's memories.
AkaOkamiRyu chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Absolutely beautiful and inspirational. An amazing piece of fanfiction, if ever there was one. I must applaud your work here, for it was very touching.