|Reviews for Bound Together Forever|
| Calvin Sloan chapter 3 . 8/31/2013
| Franz chapter 3 . 10/26/2008
Go next chapter pls keep up good work
| sweet-black-devil chapter 3 . 6/19/2006
It doesnt mind how long the chapters are! I like it! sweet story, I hope to read more of you;)
| Ygfi chapter 3 . 6/14/2006
chapters seem to be getting longer
farly good job.
i wil be one to keep reading.
| Nikki of Spira chapter 2 . 6/12/2006
Well..it is kind of short. I would love to see longer chapters from you, it's like a very short scene each chapter so far. I think you have potental...I see you're continuing this from the normal ending and not the good ending...so that's a little refreshing. Oh and by the way...the fayth is spelled that way not faith, as in having faith in something. That's all I could see for errors...try to write longer chapters and incorporate some cliffhangers and you should get a vast audience...you're new and when I first started out...I reviewed alot of peoples work so I made a name for myself and got noticed...and I didn't get my first review until my 3rd chapter...so don't get discouraged...practice makes perfect...I'm sure you can achieve that...good luck, I'll keep my eye on you.