|Reviews for The Journal|
| Established Insanity chapter 28 . 11/8/2013
Fun! Update anytime soon?
| littlemsstrawberry chapter 28 . 10/29/2013
Love it. Wishing for an update
| flaming rose chapter 28 . 9/28/2013
Oh, come on! How could you leave me such a cliifie?! Please write again soon, and I'll check out your profile page! Anyway, thanks, please update, and bye! Peace!
| d1x1lady chapter 28 . 9/15/2013
Such an interesting story! Loving it.
| Vicious Dice chapter 28 . 8/1/2013
I love this story... Please update soon...
| FemmeFerret chapter 28 . 7/5/2013
This story is excellent! Please update soon, you're a terrific writer :)
| Lorenoide2000 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
That was creepy as hell o.O
On to the next chapter!
| apathetica chapter 28 . 6/24/2013
Is this story abandoned?
| Mathlover4 chapter 28 . 5/19/2013
I really like your story and your portrayal of Tom's character! Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/3/2013
I find it somewhat ridiculous that one of your main characters complains about having to speak with a four-year-old who can't properly spell "today" when you, yourself, obviously have no concept of the difference between "wary" and "weary" and cannot properly spell "disdain" either.
Spellcheck would vastly improve the readability of this story. The central concept is novel, but good lord, you need a beta. Or to UTILIZE the spellcheck option that should be on the program you use to type this up.
| SanAlphaTau chapter 7 . 4/22/2013
I'm sorry that is a rubbish plan. I don't know if you wanted to highlight the unreliability of the narrator or you truly believe that plan is 'brilliant'. I mean Tom says it himself they have dirt on Ministry officials, there must be better ways to use it then ignoring them. Still intresting concept and quite well written.
| panchromatic chapter 2 . 4/14/2013
OK this is intensely adorable and sweet, wonder if I I get cavities after this.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 28 . 4/13/2013
will you continnua? x
| AHHHHHHHHHHH chapter 28 . 4/9/2013
Please! where is the rest of it! my mind is being blown right now!
| Shannon the Original chapter 28 . 4/8/2013
Update soon this is good