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![]() ![]() So Harry has enough power to give Tom back some of his life with out killing himself unlike Ginny? Looking forward to more. Will Tom help Harry to dress better and be more sure of himself at school? |
![]() ![]() this story is very creative you should keep with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad that harry has a friend, but at the same time I don't like seeing him manipulated. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cool. There was one thing, though, when Tom was saying how it was starting to hurt what with his soul being torn apart...but isn't he a horcrux himself? He didn't make one, he is one. That's the only thing I noticed. Keep writing, this is awesome. I like the connection this odd pair has. |
![]() ![]() Harry's too cute! Can't wait to see Tom's reaction when he hears "The-Boy-Who-Lived" story. And what about his wondering spirirt 'other' self? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. Please continue. Really. Honestly. Please. Amerision |
![]() ![]() This is a surprisingly new take for a plot. So far I like it. Please continue posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...interesting...poor Hagrid...i feel bad. I really wish that you won't stop writing because I really want to find out what happens! :( Hopefully you'll get a burst of inspiration and write again soon! I really liked it and I really want to know what happens next! So...I'll keep a lookout! KC-Chick~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it and i hope it wasn't a sign cause i like this tory please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() its way awesum, but i understand if u hav no inspiration, the story jst fades out - its happened 2 me loads newai, ill wait til u get sum inspiration, and ill b 1st 2 review xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. The writing seems a bit childish, but I kow if you keep writing and working on it, you'll get a lot better. I know what you mean about all the story ideas. I get so many in just one day. What helps me is just writing the ideas down. Sometimes I'll write the idea down and never get back to it, but it's gone from my mind and I can concentrate on my other stories. That's why I got a Livejournal, to write down all my ideas. Maybe you should try it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my god, i totalli luv this story! Keep updating (and fast ;)) rock on! xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is really interesting! I'e never seen this type of plot line before. I adore it so far and hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it being in Tom's POV...so...it's the younger Voldie, if you're staying with the books, right? So...he doesn't yet know that he's the one that killed Harry's parents...hmm...that'll be very interesting...this is kind of like a "going back in time thing"...sorta. Or at least in my head it seems that way but then again, it may very well not be like that and I've just understood wrong...I dunno. I guess we'll see! I really like it. Definitely original...I've never read anything like it before. And originality is great, especially on fanfic when many things really can get redundant... I'm just really curious to see what is going to happen to Harry when he gets to Hogwarts because it already seems as though Tom is teaching Harry to loathe the place...so, I'm very interested to see who Harry ends up being friends with and how the plotline unfolds...so keep going! Update soon! I'm really liking it! KC-Chick~ _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I've always remembered the quote in CoS about Tom's name sounding like a forgotten friend or something to that effect and I've always wanted to write or read a fic about Harry getting the diary, but I'm not good at writing fics like that, so I'm so glad to find this one! Wow, that was a run-on sentence. Anyway, just a bit of a Brit-pick: Britains don't have pre-school. School starts being mandatory at the age of five and it's called Reception. And I'm American so sorry if the explanation is not enough. If you want a more detailed explanation, there's a fabulous website w . fiction alley . org (take out the spaces) and there's a Britpicking forum there. You can ask for a better explanation. Anyway, great idea and please update soon! |