|Reviews for Story of a Man|
| zorabet chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Okay, so the summary made me cry.
I'm such an effing loser.
| UnnamedElement chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Wow. That was very moving, in the subtlest of ways (if that makes sense). Your descriptions were perfect and the idea that Roger would run away from it all was spot on. You had me fooled. I thought it was Mark in the beginning. Interesting that he took up filmmaking. Anyway, very good. Cheers- UE
| Lanhar chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
oh oh oh, what a bitersweet story.
i love it, that roger came back, and that he had gone, to his old home i guess, his sister along.
his discriptions are great, that mark smells like happiness, feels like home.
| ickle-s-10 chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
oh...that was so...so...i dont know. just powerful. and sad. and touching. and a little sweet. i just LOVE it though...so well written...amazing job.
| Puddycat chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Aww, so sad. You nearly had me crying. I loved the descriptions of the Life, they were brilliant, I can just imagine what it looked like. I was being really picky and could only find one mistake ("A mouse scuttles it's soft..." should be "its" - "it's" is "it is". See? Picky ~_). Apart from that, one word - brilliant. _ *Favourites*