Great story.
Good character development.
Nice job with the “Buffy-isms”
Thank you

Interesting Neville paired with Ginny. Most Fanfictions pair him with Luna. In Canon Neville marries Hannah Abbot

Harry Potter was born July 31 1980
Buffy Summers was born January 19 1981
Harry is actually 6 months older then Buffy not a year younger.

I remembered reading this when you were publishing it. I loved it then and i am so happy to have been able to reread it! I hope you're doing well and thank you for this story!

So harry is a year younger and everyone call him a kid just weird.

So this harry still have the horocrux.

Did Buffy and Harry ever had sex?! Please tell me!

I'll name the superfluous villain! Wizard Shit-stain! He rubs shit all over the story that didn't need him! His odiferous stench ruins all it touches! He makes you want to abandon this crap as quickly as possible! So I will!

I told you I would if you did something else so stupid that continues to ruin the story!

What a waste of time and a good premise! Buffy has TONS of villains and doesn't need any more! What was the fucking point of bring Harry over to help Buffy if you bring wizards to fight as well? There is no fucking point! You immediately invalidated everything the Buffyverse stands for! What a moRon!

I was right. This lying and pussy-footing around is really annoying. If you do anything else this mind-numbingly stupid, I'm dropping this.

It's really ****ing annoying how you keep pussy-footing around and not telling the key characters the information that they need to connect them together. I absolutely hate the pronoun game and I hope you have a particularly irritating boil grow on your left buttcheek, that way you can feel what it's like for us to read your flagrant disregard for GETTING ON WITH THE ****ING STORY!

um unico bruxo com o feitiço emperio poderia causar problemas sem fim para os trouxas, falar que os bruxos tem medo é simplismente ridiculo

That's strange... Xander calling Harry a kid? Buffy, Willow and Xander are the same age, so why is he calling Harry a kid? Did I miss something?

I really enjoyed this crossover. it had interesting twists to it from cannon, a d the buffy characters were written really well. only mistake that worried me was forgetting Giles crucio potion. it just seems to be forgotten with no side effects for him. and he never did get wolvesbane for oz. I really enjoyed buffy and Harry's interaction however. especially the point that whilst harry could just kill all the vamps easily, he understands her need to do it herself.

Very good - I will read it again in a few days... I will just leave a note to skip read 7 and 8... because a depressed laptop is a very bad thing... took me ages to coax it and my phone out of the place they were hiding...

Trust me - With the exception of chapter 7 and 8, Your story is up to par. I say that having around 200 author and over 4,000 fanfics saved on an external drive...