Reviews for It’s All Relative on the Hellmouth
Apathetic LambChoppi chapter 19 . 1/30
Ehhhhh I saw this coming. I seriously wanted this to be gen with great platonic friendship, but you decided to make it lovey dovey. :( Ergh. Still, great story all the same- I LOVE how you made Harry go bad for a short time. Wish that instead of Giles telling Buffy to have him stop, it had happened this way though: Harry, so consumed by anger and hate, decided to do what Macnair wanted to do to his "filthy" muggle friends. CRUCIO! and as Macnair screamed and laughed on the ground, thinking that his master had finally returned, Buffy (or Giles) would scream NOO STOP! and would grab onto his arm. Harry would realize exactly what he was doing and would stop. BOOM. I wish you had done that, but whatevs. :D Maybe an alternate ending? Anywho, I don't think I'll read the epilogue, mostly because I really didn't want Buffy and Harry to get together. Its your story, and I seriously LOVED it, but bit too cliche for my tastes. :) Great job though, and even though I liked the X-Men one better, this Harry's troubled past and inner evil was MUCH more fascinating. Maybe the Harry in that story will be similar? Anyway, loved it, and please keep writing!
Apathetic LambChoppi chapter 7 . 1/30
So far I'm loving this story entirely too much. Usually I just make one big review at the end of a story, but this chapter really hit me and I had to review. That line- " But, Harry liked to think it had been relief." actually made me tear up. Wonderful writing. :)
Starfox5 chapter 2 . 1/4
Ah... looks like Harry lost his friends in the war. Too bad.
Starfox5 chapter 1 . 1/4
Intriguing start. Melancholic, but with hope.
Tarix chapter 21 . 12/4/2014
A very sweet HarryBuffy story :)
nmn chapter 21 . 12/2/2014
thanks
Chim Cheree chapter 17 . 8/19/2014
Did they really just leave a wounded Macair alone? No Aurors, Azkaban, whatever?!
Chim Cheree chapter 8 . 8/18/2014
I only just realized the story is complete, you can't imagine how happy I was.
Chim Cheree chapter 3 . 8/18/2014
Really like this story so far. I'm curious what this "Voldemort" in Harry part turns out to be. Was the horcrucx absorbed instead of destroyed? I also like the characters interaction. Sometimes you make a "." where a "?" would seem more appropriate, but that's not really important.
PSay chapter 14 . 8/11/2014
This is a very interesting chapter. Harry and Angel are definitely wary of each other. Harry opening the lock was handy. The fact that the slayer was trapped away from the vampires was not too surprising. I hope Angel found Buffy ok. Harry's talk with the vampire leader was interesting. I'm glad that Harry got some information from him before he slipped away. Now where are Buffy and Angel? I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 21 . 8/10/2014
This is a great compromise for Harry and Buffy. Harry is teaching which is something he is good at and he now knows he is financially independent. Their long distance relationship is working for now. That is all that matters at this point in time. Thanks for writing a good story. I look forward to more of the World that Waits. Sincerely pms
PSay chapter 20 . 8/10/2014
This is a good view of what could happen after the end of the problem in Sunnydale. At least the MacNaire problem has been resolved. I'm glad everyone came back to England with Harry. Of course they will have to go home eventually but I'm glad that Giles was there to help Harry with the goblins. The Weasley's are healing as much as can be expected. Even Percy sounds like he may be getting better. Harry owning the Cannons is a bitter sweet thought where Ron's memory is concerned. I look forward to the second part of the epilogue. pms
PSay chapter 19 . 8/10/2014
This is a good ending at this point in time. I do look forward to an epilogue. Of course Buffy would jump to conclusions hearing what she did. I'm glad that Giles understood why Harry has to go away for a while. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of the World that Waits. Take your time. It is a great story that needs to be finished. pms
PSay chapter 18 . 8/10/2014
This is a good chapter. I'm glad Harry took MacNaire to the Ministry of Magic and that Kingsley was the one that took charge. At least Harry escaped quickly. I'm glad he went to talk to Dumbledore. That and Dumbledore knew he dealt with MacNaire. Dumbledore's offer made sense at Harry's age but he didn't pressure him at all. That was good. I'm also glad that Harry realized that Dumbledore's days are numbered. Fawkes can only do so much when time is getting short. I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 17 . 8/10/2014
This is amazing. They all portkey to the building around the Hellmouth. They find themselves surrounded, Harry and MacNaire disappear and then they find the shields that Harry gave them hold back the vampires and demons that are trying to kill them. Now Giles realizes that Harry is a son of prophecy and the he and Buffy have to save Harry and they do. But they leave MacNaire alive at the Hellmouth? Ok. I look forward to more of this story. pms
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