Reviews for Porcelain Doll
chrono-contract chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
hey, i wrote a peom similar to this! it's nice. good job!
Ambiguous Loon chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
oh my god, i absolutely love this! it's such a great poem!it would make awesome lyrics too :D.
Kai's kitty chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
Really beautiful...So true...poor Ryou-chan
Maki831 chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
Wow, this is pretty good! It's sad and tragic and just brings a lot of vivid images to mind. So good job!
umneko chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
amazing, so sad
Next-to-Nothing chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
Excellent poem, sad, but very good.

Dhani