Reviews for The First Dance
Daine from Snowdale chapter 8 . 9/22/2015
i l.o.v.e. this it's so funny i have a cold so i coughed at every funny part and i coughed alot
fallingup39 chapter 8 . 12/20/2010
hahahahaha the last two lines are the best.
Claireabelle chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Loved it! Great language, really enjoyed the plot.

Blown chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
I love the ending! It made me suddenly burst out laughing hystericaly. I got some really strange looks from my sister. )

I like your writing style. Its light and humerous. now, my review, done, I shall go and read more stories by you. And maybe I'll acctually remember to review. )
Blown chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
TMI chapter 8 . 7/2/2010
Omg that was SO GOOD!' I love it. Yay! And I loved how you tied it in with the original first scene!
TMI chapter 7 . 7/2/2010
Will turner IS pretty darn hot! Lol and I loved these chapters! 'for some reason made evryone think of a peacock,' I loves it! Yay!
sally94 chapter 8 . 5/28/2010
anon chapter 8 . 11/8/2009
*conga music* awesome, awesome,awesome! really funny
studentofwords chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
Nice. Good job!
JazziesxXxBabe chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
I love it I love it I love it a lot!
Horsemistress chapter 8 . 3/31/2009
It was great! I love love love love love love love the ending where Daine tells Numair to change him back and kicks Perin's butt! Perin was portrayed perfectly by being "I'm the best there is!" But Numair crying like a little girl, was mean, I just so happen to like Numiar(HEHE). You could of had Numair to have a plan and pretended to be Daine to find it was Perin. But it was a really great story and I look forward to reading more of your Daine and Numair stories.

PS. Will is pretty hot isn't he? (HEHEHE)
violeteyedkitten chapter 8 . 8/31/2008
That was really really good fic. I loved the ending, it was hilarious! :)


Sandy chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
Numair and Daine didn't act like Daine. The story line is fine, but you might want to change the characters dailouge.
EHMHGOD EDWARD CULLEN chapter 8 . 5/5/2008
When I read this I almost couldn't stop laughing
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